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schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Go Draco!!! I soooo need chapter 8!!!!
person SP777
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

Naw, it wasn't too much fiddling, though I never saw this story as an AU. It was just
a little out of the blue for me at that moment.

All in all, everything is tight so far in the plot.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is the cutest thing i have read in a while positively loved it
person Tesgura
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, love the kiss.

I don't mean to sound like you need approval of anyone in order to write, I just wanted you to know that I enjoy reading this new, particular direction I have yet to read before. Sorry if I sounded rude or anything.

*hugs* Tesgura
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hum...what a good story and very well written. I love it and really looking forward to the new charpter..but...before that...may I ask....is this going to become Draco as the submit one??oh...please tell me no, I really love this story but I would really hate that my imaginary Draco being the one as sub. Please?? Please let it be our lovely beautiful Harry?? Thank you!!! Love your story and please keep it up!!
person kati
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. That's sweet. And Draco owes Harry now! So is he gonna be all servile and stuff, trying to make it up to him? Cause a lostpuppy Draco is a very cute Draco indeed. :) Good chapter.

~Kati-chan
person SP777
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

I was laughing at your response to Kati-chan 'our picture perfect, impossibly
pretty Harry' trying saying that 5 times fast!.

Also, the scene with Draco CONSTANTLY hugging Harry, who has severe injuries
is reminiscent of comedies I've seen where the person is injured and an
overly-enthused individual is trying to squeeze the life out of them...causing
MORE damage. :-)

NOW, about the Sectumsempra curse, if memory serves me right that's a curse
Prof. Snape created in his teenage years, SO those Auror guards shouldn't have
known about that.

Explain yourself young lady.
person Elly
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay! Harry's becoming more human, he's falling in luuuuuurve! Or at least, friendship love *shrug* Anyway, I'm still intrigued by Harry's way of thinking. All this confusion about perfectly normal things (to me) is fun to read and think about. The weirdest thing is it all makes sense. How silly we humans are ^.^
person Elly
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omgomgomg! I had to force myself to type this review cause I just really want to go on to find out what happened to Harry! Beautiful, wonderful, confused, loving, human Harry :D But I did force myself because I know how reviews are to a starving author ;) So here's a pretty apple for your growling tummy (I promise it's not poisoned)
person Elly
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeee, cute! :D I have to admit, I'm a macho!Draco kinda girl. I heart the Draco whose egos stand in the way of EVERYTHING sane, including hot secks with Harry (cause what's more sane than that?). But your Draco is rather appealing in his own damsel-in-distress-only-not-really-cause-he's-a-hot-MALE kind of way. Not to mention that his soft side is provoking the softer bit of Harry, which I'm enjoying :)))) Can't wait for chapter seveeen!