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Very romandtic and very pride and prejudice.. love it..more more more

Liked it....are you going to have some sort of medicinal herbs to remove the infection? Maybe an infusion of willow bark, and some sulphur? They didn't have antibiotics, and folks could die from infection. Can't wait for the rest. I can't remember if the girl died in Pride and Prejudice, but I don't think she did. She had some sort of fever, though, didn't she? :D

Chapter 1:
well what can I say but wow....this has so much fucking potential it is not even funny. This is absolutely and ingenious idea the first chapter blew me away how creative and bending u got with characters and I find alot of things fitting like HOW MUCH mrs. bennet and molly are alike and how fitting arthur and molly play your assigned roles, and geez I am just so excited by this story, I hope u see it through. I cant wait to see what u do with the other characters, and its scary how much hermione could be similar to the original story's heroine when u really think about it if she was in that era...lol MORE.

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Scarlet

chapter 2:
OK i was salivating while I was reading this it was so good. And your author's note answered the exact question I was gonna ask, it would be seriously yummy to see how u are going to fit in the smut and sexual tension in this story but I was glad how u r doing it so far with hermione's little emotions and flutterings. Oh god I died when she finally meet draco/Mr.Darcy, and love who u put as harry's sis I almost died with laughter...lol Pansy. And oh god it is frightening how good and tension filled, and angsty all those meetings with hermionbe and draco in this is gonna be. The angst has started out already with draco being a prick and hermione immediate attraction, lord I gonna have a seizure before its done...lol Keep up the great work.

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Scarlet

Nice second chapter. Are you planning on following the plot of Ms. Austen's work right through? Can't wait! :D

great! cant wait for more

okay i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am such a huge fan of jane austen, espically pride and prejudice! :) i cant wait to see what you do with the story, what you tweak for your purposes! ;) i will be watching for more--lots more!!! :)

ps you have one typo in one of the paragraphs you for got and put malfory instead of darcy.
(question is it ment to be gryffinor or is it suppose to be gryfindor? if you spelled it that way on purpose just ignore this part :) sorry and i hope that i have not upset you!)

Oh, I like the start of this....I hope you continue. Can't wait for more. Lav and the Patil sisters as well sister is hilarious.

As a huge fan of Jane Austen and Harry Potter. This is pretty cool. =)

nice