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for Forgotten Not Forgiven

by Digitallace

person Carolyn
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story :) Really hope that's not the end though!
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter ROCKED!!! At first I was starting to get confused and maybe a little disappointed. I was thinking; 'No way! He wouldn't actually be spineless enough to give in so quickly'. By the time they got to the hotel, my eyes were near popping out of my skull, 'cause a kiss is one thing but to actually shag the conniving ferret on the first date? *shakes head* But then, BOOM Baby!! Hahahaha! In your FACE Malfoy!! AH Hahahaha Heeheee... ah.. *wipes away tear* Man, that made me happy. Sweet justice.

Alright, so I know it was cruel of Harry and 'two wrongs don't make a right' and all that, but I really think Draco needed to feel some serious, painful consequences. If Harry gave in too easily, I think his initial reluctance would have just been forgotten. Draco would have been strutting around, thinking he was some kind of genius and not thought twice about trying something similar later. This is dramatic enough to actually get through his thick head.

Genius, he ain't. There are so many different ways he could have handled the situation, and while he goes on about the impossibility of Harry leaving his wife for him, it's not as if he even tried. He was confident enough in his ability to seduce him after having shagged his wife, but not to seduce him away from said wife in the first place? Come on now. I don't think it would have been as difficult as he thought. There was some implication earlier that he would have left her for that other guy, right?

By the way... YES! Me, me! I want to meet him! lol I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, and I hope the maid finds Draco and then dies of a nosebleed and can't help him. ^_^
person Luvdonite
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me!!!! I want 2 meet Allen Jerkbag. lol.

awww. poor Draco. Harry needs to hurry up and forgive him poor darling.
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Wow wasent xpectn that! Update!
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that I hadn't seen this before!!! Great work, I loved reading every chapter!!! Ginny needs another kick in the rump though...maybe Harry can sue her or something? Just more embarrassment please! And Draco...well done with having him get what he deserves! And Allen, I wanna meet him! Seems the elusive Aussie might have something for Harry or something?

Awesome work, I can't wait for more!
person jjl
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that Draco goes after Harry in a real Malfoy way. And I hope he gets him LOL
person Ayame
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I find that I align myself to Draco and what Draco did? This chapter tore my heart when Draco was left the bed and he felt that rejection from Harry. I don't know if I would do what Draco did to get the person I like, but I find it sweet that Draco tried that hard to get Harry. I think it's kinda romantic. Is that bad? I think Harry is being too harsh...lol...well I definitely know why in one quiz I was put in Gryffindor House and another said that I would most likely date a Slytherin...hmmm...

As for meeting Allen, is he going to cause more angst? Probably...I'm not sure if I want to meet him. I do want to know more about Harry and Allen's story, but if Draco gets hurt because of this or if Draco does something stupid to push Harry away again, I'm not sure...

BTW...I love the stories especially the Twisted Faerie Tales
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha! Sorry but I just loved seeing Draco get a taste of his own medicine. Although I doubt Harry can stay away for long hehehe.... Thanks for the update!
person akahimena
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^_________^ Awesome! I love love love this chapter. I like how Harry tricked Draco. Our cunning little Harry XD he wasn't almost in Slytherin for nothing XD please update soon! I wanna meet Allen!
person tiggator
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Amazing job on this chapter. Draco definitely got his, and we got a little yummy action in the process. Yay for Harry. Hmm, I wouldn't mind meeting Allen. :) Especially if it's some encounter with Draco and him. Now THAT would be interesting. :)