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for Forgotten Not Forgiven

by Digitallace

person k
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry deserved that. I really don't trust that Allen guy. That's an amazing 360.
person Juana13
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh i really hope u don't end it that way, with Harry running away from draco who is wearing a white coat.... O.O oh but man, i can't believe that harry would go back and ask draco for a favor after what he just did to him. i'm with draco when he kicked harry away.
but now, i don't know how those two are going to get together. harry hurt draco really bad, and vice versa, but draco is still trying to recover. i don't think he'll trust harry for a while now. and what about this allen guy? i hope him and harry don't get into a serious relationship. already i don't like him for some reason....
looking forward to your next update, which i hope is soon!! can't wait!!
person serilla
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So love this story. Harry what are you doing? - first you humiliate Draco and then except him to help you not fall for Allen (yes I know Draco probably got what he deserved but in a funny way I can kind of understand all the things Draco has done to try an get Harry). Glad Draco told him no that he wouldn't help but I'm kind of hoping that while Allen and Harry are at dinner he will turn up anyway - though somehow I don't think you'll make it that easy LOL. Oh... and one last thing - the line where Harry is thinking about Draco - "He'd grown like a weed through his heart - impossible to pluck out" so love it. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person polka dot
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, he just can't be at all slytherin and sneaky like Draco. He doesn't stand a chance.
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good work here! I loved how Draco was crsuhed, but you did good in teaching him a lesson. i have a bit of mixed feelings about Allen, but we'll see what you plan with him! Keep up the great job!
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dooo! XD!
person cjbarker
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco got what he had coming for putting Harry though hell. How could he believe it would be that easy to get Harry. I do want to meet Allen and see where that goes. Good Story thou still made at Draco thou.
person ...
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I was really enjoying the story till then... Man... I don't think I can read this anymore...
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say I agree
Draco needed to be put in his place a bit
:)

update soon????
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, k I know Draco deserves what he got but still I was sad to see what Harry did to him.

I can only say I got hook on this story I love it.....keep it up.