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for Forgotten Not Forgiven

by Digitallace

person Anon
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no, please dont write a stroy that'll potray ginny as good. i hate her! This story is so good partly because of that fact! please more! i cant wait to find out what happens. i feel like i know but i just want to know how it happens! the suspense!!
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story... But Ginny well she INFURIATES me!! GOD she is soooo sell centered and naive... *sighs*
person Luvdonite
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhg. i hate ginny even more if that's even possible. I feel really bad for my poor Harry. I don't particularly like hermione and ron right now. I can't wait for the next chapter. you have a way of keeping me right at the edge of my seat.
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG.................
Ginny is such a BITCH and is not only ruining Harry and Draco's lives(even if its kinda draco's fault, she's lying to him) but also Ron and Hermione...
i hope they dont believe harry and have a good relationship later.
grrrr she needs to just tell everyone.....grrr
sry she's tickin me off, but i guess thats what she is...
good story though, it draws me in, as do most of yours.
you're a great writer!!
CANNOT wait for the next chapter!!!
-Kyle
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story. It's so far out of the norm and I love the creativity. You've got an intriguing plot and some well rounded characters. I'm glad that you didn't actually make Ginny a one-dimensional heartless bitch. She may be incredibly selfish, but you can see how events wore her down and understand why she started on this path. (Not that I don't eagerly await her punishment.^^)

At first I wondered what the hell Draco thought he was doing, since Harry would be upset with him for sleeping with his wife. After this chapter though, I think I get it. From Draco's point of view, he's not the one who's being dishonest. I also imagine he has great confidence in his own ability to sweet-talk and seduce.

This last chapter was great, by the way. Everyone is so blind! Assumptions are flying around everywhere. Ron's so sure Harry's a cheater. Harry refuses to even consider the possibility of his own wife cheating, even though she's obviously not getting her needs met with him. And Draco dropped so many obvious hints, it was almost ridiculous but all of it flew right over Ginny's head, because the idea of Draco having any homosexual leanings was just beyond her.

Personally, I think she just wanted it to be her. After all this time, she should have figured out that wasn't the case. As if Draco Malfoy would settle for this kind of half-assed arrangement with 'the love of his life'.
Anyway, you're doing a fabulous job! Keep it coming!
person tiggator
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked this chapter. It gave us a lot more information on Draco, that's for sure. I'm really interested to see how this is all going to pan out. Obviously Draco likes Harry. I assume he is trying to break up their marriage so he can be with him, but what keeps bothering me is the way he thinks Harry already knows about their affair and has yet to leave her. Why does he continue to sleep with Ginny if he sees that the marriage has not ended because of it? Unless he doesn't believe that Ginny told him... Or maybe he really does have a thing for both of them... Or maybe it's all part of his game... Ahh!! So many thoughts! Can't wait for more. I just wonder how Harry will be able to forgive Draco for bedding his wife (unless... is it possible he may have ASKED him to do it??) LOL So many holes to fill. Keep up the great work!
person polka dot
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hard to feel any sympathy for Ginny in this fic She is definitely in for a surprise when Draco steals her husband from her
person Caldonya
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. It reminds me of a unraveling. everything falling apart slowly. I hope it doesn't destroy Harry to much after all a little H/C isn't bad : )
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 5!!!
person elektra
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont see this story ending good at all for anyone, even if Ginny is cought by Harry how does that help Draco he's been sleeping with Harry's wife why would Harry want him after that, I really don't get it. It's makes me wonder how it's going to end so I will keep reading.