rate_review Reviews

Your writing style is a little strange, but I really enjoyed the fragmented underdeveloped and desperate thought processes of a young "Boy" Harry. It was touching and really good.

The Severus and Remus pairing was kinda odd though. Its not that you can't put them together (far from it! Its an odd and random pairing, hardly ever done. Actually I was kinda to surprised to see it, especially after reading "The Other Side of the Mirror" which just recently was completed. - I highly recommend it.) Its just that the pairing shows up with no explanation. You need to go into it more. Having Remus show up with Severus to sneak a peak at Harry comes off extremely random, since they generally hate each other in the books.

Other than that, overall good job. ^^ Keep up the great work!

This is really interesting so far. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

So far good . Where are you going with this fic

I actually liked the way that you wrote the scenes with the Dursleys. The lack of description made it feel.. surreal and alien-ish.. xD not sure if I'm conveying the impressing I got correctly but yeah.. The poem at the beginning was also a nice touch, sweet and simple. Poor Harry :( makes you just wanna give him a hug ;[ The Remus/Sev interaction is amusing though :D

I think it is a good start. I would love to see where you are going with it. I too read alot of fanfic but I have yet to bite the bullet and get inspired to write one, although I do have one in mind. Maybe you can inspire me to actually put it to paper (or screen as the case may be). Good Luck and please update soon.

ONly recently started to read this and I am enjoying it alot.

Wow. That was very good. Very well written. I can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.