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for Hopes and Wishes

by 4872luk

person arcee1000
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about your grand dad give him ahug for me :<) I love this and the last chapter. I love the fighting about the lions and snakes
person Yuutousei
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Aww! Little Harry FTW!

It's nice to see the WAFF-ness, especially after watching "A Very Potter Musical," rofl

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Was I the only one who thought something extremely dirty when I found out that Severus's wand has a "vibrating" alarm feature o.o Does that make me a bad person?
person Mayhem Junkie
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god-the first five chapters of this broke my heart! Just thinking of poor little Harry, who just wanted his teddy...*sob* And the m/m sex was well done, in the opinion of another girl.

schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, I love you.
This is so cute!
And no, the sex wasn't too spontaneous.
And I love how Remus is jealous,
It's cute!
You should totally have Marge plagued by dogs...
Or something.
person arcee1000
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter I like how you wrote the sex scene I especially like how you wrote the dog scare scene you did a good job with Harrys perspective.
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet chapter. I like how you had Remus feeling jealousy over Harry seeking out Severus. Not many people realise that there is some small amount of rivalry between parents whether they acknowledge it or not.

Good job on the story and the chapter.
person Bones
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter as always.
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It has been a while...I am so happy to see the new charpters are up and have to say, nicely done. always the pleasure to read and the story just flow flawlessly. very well done. Once again, love the story and really cannot wait to see the new charpter up sooner.
ps. the sex was good, you did very well...
person paganwomyn
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hang in there sweetie. I'm sending good wishes and love to you and grandpa. I have a little experience in this kind of thing. Actually, writing a sweet story like this kind of helps. I'm enjoying the story very much and I hope you and yours will be alright. "Hopes and Wishes" to you too! Love paganwoman
person Darkless
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*grrrrrr* that damn Aunt Marge. Paralyze the biatch and starve the mutts till they take chunks outta her hide. She could stand to loose some poundage.

My...that was rather bloodthirsty, wasn't it? Hehehe