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for A New Kind of Magic

by Crowbait

schedule February 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi. This is a really good story, and I hope you will update it someday. I really want to see Harry/Gabrielle action.

Good luck with the writing Reader458

schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

really interesting so far!

 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (^_^)

person addict.
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I NEED MOAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
person qwerty23131
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! any chance for an update?
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fantastic storry please update
person tommye
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Harry getting all the attention. I want to read more.

Update soon.
person Tanner
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! More, please.
person paul
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very good i would like read more what other sites do you right for
person Antoine
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good Stuff.
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it. That was all around hotness. I so love stories where Harry gets a clue about girls and takes advantage of all the sweet flesh waiting to offer their bodies to him. I mean, he is the Chosen One, after all, might as well work it. Knowing Harry, though, he would never treat them badly, and I feel pretty confident that he'd be quite the giving lover.

Lol, that it was Gabrielle's prepubescence that got him all started on this, and loved the adulation and hero worship after he finished the Second Challenge. Now, as for what's keeping this hard-on going with no release, I wonder if its a side-effect of the Gillyweed? No wonder Snape was so pissed he'd snatched some from his stores! As for the owner of the second hand come into play, I'm wondering who likes the voyeurism the most out of that bunch. Maybe Padma's sister followed them? Or was it someone we haven't seen yet? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, and 'squirting girl juice' is awesome, especially when Harry was keeping his head back to watch her face as he licked her out. He's such a little pervert, I love him.