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Well that just took a sudden turn. I like the beginning, how you introduce us to Draco's personal hell and how he has to pretend. I love that Hermione is his fantasy girl. I was a little surprised at how easy it was for Hermione to fantasize about Draco, but I do understand her desire to have the attention of other boys and not be so "claimed". This new project will be interesting. I'm curious to see where you take this. I'll be keeping my eyes out for another update soon. =)

Ok its a great story idea, but your spelling is very bad.
for starters you need to spell characters' names correctly ... it's spelt Lucius.

also you need to work on punctuation

well THAT caught me off guard.

OMG! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! I LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!

This is really intriguing so far. I love what you did with that crossover. Wonderful! Thank you. HG4eva

Lovely contrasting chapter...I love how they were dreaming of each other simultaneously.

PS: love can you separate your graphs for easier reading? txs so much.

Q: I'm assuming this is post-war? thanks.

"He was probably thinking about pie." Priceless. I like it so far! Can't wait to see what they do in detention *wriggles eyebrows*. I love the depiction of Pansy, that's exactly how I imagine her, slimy, sqealing and annoying. Couple things I would like to point out though is that it is spelled "Neville" and I don't think Pansy Parkinson knows who Jesus is ;). But I loved the view he got of her panties, how mortifying for her! But how good for the story. Please keep it up!!