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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Homophones are NOT your friends. I can't count the incorrect words I spotted, but for one it's 'frightened' (=Scared) not 'freighted' (=Shipped as cargo). Your wrong words are spelled right, that much spellcheck does for you, but you've got to be spelling the right words. You need a beta. Badly.
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, NP for the chapter name XD...Hermione is on a mission now! Draco is going to have to watch his step. They are both playing with fire, and I suspect they will both end up getting burned. Bless little Sophia though...she just keeps them in the real world. My God, is Pansy annoying! I hope Draco finds a way to get rid of her soon! Look forward to the next chapter!
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story this morning. I can't wait for the next chapter! So - keep it up!!
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is starting out. Can't wait for the update.
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up. An interesting idea for a story.
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anxiously awaiting your next update.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that man is going to implode...yes, Blaise pursuing Hermione would be AMAZING...after all, Draco's with Pansy right??? LOL
wait, is this post-war??? I can't remember.
wait, is this post-war??? I can't remember.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Was not expecting that ending, but it was a nice surprise. Typical Draco, changing the colours of the sling. Well, what did Hermione expect; him to walk around with a pink baby sling? She must have forgotten they can do magic!!! And so the game is afoot! I wonder which one of them will be making the next move...
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good chapter! Draco is changing, that much is obvious. I love the idea of the punishment; this way, they have to get on with each other or they just make the situation worse. Plus, men with babies are so attractive!!! There's no way on earth Hermione can't fall for him now! Look forward to the next chapter!
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved this it was mmazeing !! YAY! add more!