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Jealous, much? He does get his knickers in a bit of a twist, doesn't he? Maybe Blaise is helping them along a bit by bringing out Draco's jealousy. Loving how he's getting a bit more possessive and dominant now, too. Can't wait to see what happens in Hogsmeade!

I just want to say your stories amazing! I love it. And i hope you do more soon!
PLEASE do more chapters!
thanks :]

I love this softer side of Draco. Keep writing!!

You're very welcome for the review. I give them out when I read good work. And yours is excellent. Keep it up, and come back with more soon.

for a second there I thought....but no. But if Draco is going to make an effort with her then she ought to do the same, instead of avoiding him because she thinks she is in love with him, LOL. Phew, no Pansy in this chapter. I can imagine she would be fun to write actually. Look forward to the next chapter!

Oh you naughty tease...that opening was perfect...sigh, only a dream.

I think she does love Draco and he her. Little Sophia's wakings give them time to spend togeher in the dark and at night. Yummy! :-)

Your summary sounds intriguing and I am very interested in how this story will progress. However, and I have to be honest, I had to stop reading after the first two chapters. Your spelling and grammar mistakes really pulled me out of the story. I tried to overlook them, but there were quite a few. It was especially frustrating with the misspelling of characters' names. (Nevel, Blaize) Again, this is an interesting premise which would really benefit from a beta read through. Apologies if I'm breaking an type of reviewer etiquette. (And for not having an AFF account.)

loved it

please update soon =D

Nightmare~~Wow...her spelling may be bad in spots, but at least she can read, which is clearly more than you are capable of...the warning clearly stated that this chap hadn't been beta-read yet. Do us all a favor and go un-bunch your panties. It's a good story, with excellent writing, whether there's an occasional spelling mistake or not.

well, he's getting more and more angry isn't he? Q: Pansy walked in on him? she made the house-elf apparate her to his room? that's just wrong...yeah, Hermione needs some suitors.