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not bad, but the sex it's a little monotonous... I'm sure the Ron/Ginny will be better... about Hermione/Sirius ending together... egggg!... for me it's like Hermione/Dumbledore or Hagrid... It's like those men of 50 or more who are married with girls of 14... Sirius and Lupin are totally adults (wherever do Sirius, he IS an adult), and Hermione and her friends are not... It would be like stole all the youth of Hermione... and honestly... Sirius is too... all!!!... too handsome, too good in bed, too understanding... he is simply perfect in body and soul... I begin to hate him a little... I hope the youngsters put him 'right' as soon as possible... in MHO, adolescents and grandpas?.... no thanks!... ;-)

Great Chapter can't wait to see what happens next. Loved Harry and Ron having make-up sex. Still less ~~~~~ please have some chocolate for your muse!

great chapter! Ron and Ginny would be great...especially judging by the way Ron is treating her. That sex would be hot!!! Hermione and Sirius deserve to be together. They make a great couple. Look forward to the next chapter!

first: happy birthday!!!

second: at last Ron score!!! I was losing hope!

Well... the fic is good, but you can have some 'problems'. Your fic. is a 'Horny Howgarts', all people having sex... this is easy, but it can be... not very variated. All your girls are 'screamers' (some girls are silent... or only repeat one word or two, etc...) and the sex is similar... well, your last chapter is much better in this, Ron is having 'revenge' sex with Ginny. This is good because you can use the 'angry' feelings of Ron and the guilt of Ginny (for the incest) to make this more 'kinky' and more variated.

If you want to make this more interesting I would make the 'Young' generation fight for the girls with the Oldies... maybe Harry/Ron/Draco? again Lupin/Sirius?... and I'll put more fellings... maybe angry sex for Ron with Ginny and Hermione... Harry would want to show his new aptitudes... a kinky Draco? or a little revenge agains Hermione and Sirius... for Sirius and Lupin it would be to chose between the young girls and someone with more 'experience'... gilt for f*cking the son and friends of James... etc... anything to make the sex more rich and variated...

In my humble opinion in the end Sirius and Lupin are the past, and they would make a gentleman retreat to let the young ones to make their owns decisions, mistakes, etc... to make their own future...

Happy Birthday! Cookies for such a great chapter! I love the idea of fucking on a broom. And Ron doing that to Ginny... I wish I'd have thought of that! Look forward to more!

Ok this only needs and orgy to have it all.. LOL

This story is pretty fucked up but in a good way. I'd like to see more Sirius/Hermione/Remus/Moony action.

Ok Great Gift (Less of thees though ~~~~~~) They made my screen go odd! Happy Birthday!



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HOT stuff! I really like the Hermione/Sirius/Remus thing, it works really well. I have no more people suggestions, but I did think about anal, or using a butt plug or something? Maybe even double penetration? Just a suggestion! Look forward to the next chapter!

RE: chapter one

This story has pretty good detailed smut--sexy too.
;~D

Keep up the good work!