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i'm reviewing, i'm reviewing. geee. lol. :) another good a smutty chapter with plot. :)

What the hell man!?! What is Molly Weasley's problem? Really I think someone needs theropy.

i just finished up all 36 chapters. great story!!!! I don't understand though why Sirius let Molly into the house at Christmas??

I just devoured your story!
And I want mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's great!
I think I might steal some ideas... I never thought of mixing Molly and Arthur into my sex-szenes before...
And really... that's a jealous horny bitch jou've let her becomme... (she certainly doesn't get nearly enough sex! Did you ever think ablut letting the twins change that?)
*grinning like mad*

(Why don't you let Ron suggest the twins the three of them would fuck their mother? I'd really want to read how all three are fucking her at once! The twins front and behind, while she sucks Ron's cock... that would be something... ... ... well maybe you should forget Ron and let Arthur to it... (I'm for the first suggestion though!))

Okay, I know that this is PWP, and you sure do have the porn part down pat...lol

Wow! I liked the energy and thought you put into this piece...it is obvious that you wanted to give Hermione a chance to shed her "good girl" image and...ahem...spread her proverbial wings? *wink*

Just a suggestion, for next time you may wish to vary your erotic images...i.e. someone taking her up against a wall, in front of mirrors as well as other "dangerous" spots like the Main Hall of Hogwarts where they could get caught. Try to avoid the over use of certain phrases such as "eat pussy" as the redundance makes it lose its lovely shock value.

Those were only suggestions, given freely so you don't need to follow if you don't wish to. :D

Otherwise, Kudos for such an interesting and exciting fic.

Yay he asked! Loved Molly flipping out!

first i would like to think you for chapter 31... i hate story where becouse of who hermione dating she stop being friend with RON.. so think you for makeing them friends again...

and think you for the letting ron make hermione cum. that would bug him a lot... good story...

Loved the chapter. I can't wait for him to propose

very good story... it is OOC but that is the point very hot.. may i ask a for somethink.. ok a few somethink..

can you have ron in homine become friends again.. they where close for a long time... they need to have sex again if for no other reason that got to suck for on the only time they tried.. ron could not make her cum.. he need to have a redo.. he gotin better...

ron need a girlfriends... not just his sister... can he get some crazy sex for a chapter please...

good story very hot