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What an incredibly intense chapter! I felt like I was watching a movie or something. The whole journey over the bridge had me looking away, and jumping up and down. Especially because of the warnings on this fic, I'm just so scared something is gonna go down and I don't know when. I love that! lol. I was surprised that Harry did what he did, but he made such a poignant statement about why he did that its hard to argue with that sort of logic. That's the whole point of what they're doing, isn't it. I love that he gets that, and how he and Ron reconciled...that was beautiful. LOL@ Hermione being the one to tell them to tuck away their emotions and keep focused. I love the gender bend here on stereotypes and how you're really sticking to who they are. I am worried about them not having a tent now...the fire will be even more crucial, if they can even start one. I have a bad feeling, but I can't stop reading, you've made it too good, I have to know what happens next...and of course, because you haven't shown me the next chapter, I'll be here waiting on pins and needles for the next bit tomorrow night. Excellent and gripping update Em.

It was really heavy to read the impacts of the war on their lives. Its devastating how many losses they've endured. Of course it would change them as people. Ron especially, seems to have taken on the pain and turned it into something really scary almost. It is kinda sexy how he's become sorta like a daddy like figure in the absence/loss of Arthur. His reaction to Arthur's, Ginny's, and the twins' deaths was heartbreaking to read. I can't imagine having to lose so many people with the knowledge that there's still no end in sight. The feeling of hopelessness and survive at all costs must stay with them. I was surprised that Snape of all people left him to take the lead in the Order, although the more I think of it, the more it makes sense considering Ron's temperment and Harry's compassion. It was a good move. Again, brilliant characterization with Ron and Harry's bickering and moments of annoyance with each other. I can so see that. Reminds me of the Forest of Dean all over again, only much darker. I also love how they apologize, they know they can never stay too mad at each other. I like how strong Hermione is, and that she's leading and the boys have to keep up with her. I can't wait to see what she found, sounds like it's going to be a problem. Great update, lots of information, can't wait until tomorrow night! (((Emily)))

SQUEE!!! Emily, I LOVE LOVE LOVE my Bedtime story! Not only are you taking my favorite ship, Harry/Hermione/Ron, and showing their close bond through friendship and sex, but you're testing that friendship with their circumstance. I love how IN CHARACTER everyone is. Ron's sarcasm and annoyance with Hermione is sooo Ron and amusing at times. I love they play off of each other and how Harry is the calmer voice of the three. The set up to their sex scene was so realistic and a little bittersweet because of what they're doing. I love that they have a ritual of sorts and humor is a part of that. You always manage to balance humor, angst, sex, and drama so well, and I can already see the promise of that in this first chapter alone. The sex was HOT : ) Thank you for that. And LOL@Ron telling Harry to shut up when he shouted he could feel him inside of Hermione. Priceless stuff.

Now, The warnings in this fic SCARE me but you promised you'd make it a happy ending, although I can't imagine how, I trust you. I'm already worried about them using fire if they're are in Voldemort's territory. Holding my breath for them and for your next update. This is wonderful, can't wait to see where you take them.

Thank you once again, I'm in love with it, and I'm sure its going to be my favorite Trio fic, and that's saying something ((((Emily))))

OMG! This is amazing! I'm so glad you decided to post this, Soft can talk anybody into anything can't she? ;)
Thanks for this incredible, hawt story!

Gods. I don't know what was better - the sex, or that gorgeous line at the end. It was so hot, but so sweet.