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person MyDearLadyDisdain
schedule December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Fantastic job. I usually don't like when authors put songs n their work, but you did it really well!
I've only just started looking at triofics, but I've found that it's rare to find ones where they're all in character. Yours is perfect though. Great job!
person Lexi
schedule May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The sheer volume of emotions that is coursing through me is overwhelming and it is all thanks to you. It was beautiful, innocent, raw and cruel in a way that left me breathless at your utter brilliance. I am so awed by you right now that I don't even know how to express my gratitude to you for writing the most compelling trio fic I have ever read. Thank you *standing ovation*
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Oh god. That was cute and depressing and I loved it. I'm just glad they're together even in the afterlife.
person Katrina
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story would have made me cry, if I could cry.
This was epic. Dark, bleak, beautiful. Bravo.
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok so...they're dead? I mean it a happy ending that they were all together
in the beyond the beyond but its just so unexpected. Im so close to tears
from reading this...like wow this is a very good and touching story. I can
honestly say this is the BEST fanfic I ever read
person eppie
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I've just started getting into your writing. For this story, you used the pefect sentence structure for this story. It's heart-breakingly sad, even with the ending. It's beautiful.
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a really endearing story. I haven't read a decent Hr/R/H story in a while.
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was such a beautiful story. And beautiful doesn't completely cover it unfortunately. I kept reading, scared for the end, figuring that they'd find out Harry to be a Horcrux and sacrifice him, or not depending on if the "madness" (humaneness) ran out or not. But this was kind of gorgeous. I love Draco so very much. I was intrigued when you had him scowl when mentioning Lupin and Tonks, rather than smirking. Writing all the hero's stories and their bravery was so winning here. I love it. The part that hit the greatest cord with me though was probably the sappiest line. I do so love Harry (when he called Ron [and Hermione] his "greatest good"]. I truly love this story.
person liz
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... this was just absolutely beautiful. i usually avoid death fics because who wants to see their favorite characters die? but this has to be one of the most amazing pieces i've ever read. it's so cool seeing how far you've come since i first read any of your stuff. i remember thinking that you needed polishing, but you were talented. i liked your writing style even if your characterizations and plot devices needed work. and since, i've been sure to read all of your writings and i'm glad of it. your work is always well written and your concepts original and well thought out. but i think this one tops them all. it illustrates everything i love about the golden trio. their friendship, their loyalty, the way they hold up each other. you wrote ron and hermione as characters in their own right, not just support services for harry. i love that in this story, you can see how much they've grown together and what the war has done to them. but the point being, that as as long as they have each other, nothing can really ever be that bad. because without each other, they had nothing worth having. it was just so poignant. and when they died together, i wanted to both laugh and cry. because i was sad their young lives were cut short after so much pain. yet, in the afterlife, they still had eachother and all the others they'd loved and lost. i'm sorry for rambling so much but this was utter perfection for me. thank you so much for writing it.

elizabethdenbow21@msn.com
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one was good.. Eternity sound pretty enjoyable.. LOL