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awesome story i would love to see it finished keep up the good work

I don't normally like marriage law stories but this ones good. Please update soon.

You stopped at the good part!Hurry up and update I have to know what happened!

Yay!! Another chapter!! I'm wondering though, about dear Ronald. I am having a sneaking suspicion that he will be expecting 'mione to choose him. I can only imagine what kind of reaction that he is going to have when she announces her choice. He's going to throw a tantrum and behave like a prat. Yup. I can see it now. He's going to throw a tantrum, and Molly Weasley is going to be all hissified about it as well, since she's always thought of her as another daughter and always suspected that she would become a part of the family and all. I've always sort of disliked Ron, I don't know what it is about him, maybe because he's so stupid and oblivious to everything around him, and I am pissed off that JK Rowling paired them up. In the real world, I highle doubt that someone as smart as Hermione would go for such a blithering idiot. But I digress....Sirius of course, will be secretly delighted that such a young, brilliant and beautiful witch chose such an "old man" to be her husband. ^.^ And I am sure that he will have loads of fun corrupting our sweet and innocent Hermione of course. ^.^

This is an incredible story. I can't wait to read more.

I really enjoyed the start of this. Can't wait for more! :)

Woohoo!! I love the Sirius/Hermione pairing. You have a wonderful start here. Yes, everyone does seem to write the marriage law stories, but I like the idea, and I know you will put your own spin on it. ^.^ I cannnot wait to read more. And as for making their dialogue more british...I came across a lovely little website chock full of British slang and colloquisms. One of my favorite words I found on there is berk. ^.^ It goes from A - Z. I myself, am writing a story where there are British characters, and was delighted to find it. So here is the link for it if you like http://www.peevish.co.uk/slang/a.htm I hope you can find it useful, and don't think I am being presumptuous in offering it. ^.^ Isn't Sirius such a sexy beast? *giggles* Oh and I love how he found Hermione having a go at herself. His reaction was wonderful. I also loved how Hermione had such a clinical approach to masterbation..."an orgasm is a healthy occurance" or something like that. LOL. Silly bookworm. She needs Sirius to come in and show her all his carnal knowledge and release the naughty tigress I'm sure is inside of her. Hurray for marriage laws!! LOL. Can't wait to read about his wooing, and such. Lemonade indeed. ^.^

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