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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Didn't care for this chapter much!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco and Fenrir are going to have to do alot of begging and kissing ass!
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to seem like I'm being too critical, but this is not a story. What you have here is a rough outline for a story, with some extra information and facts tossed in like an excerpt from an index. None of the ideas are linked together cohesively enough to be considered finished work.
There are some interesting points and plot ideas. Please take another shot at it, maybe get some help to flesh it out. Don't give up, I'd like to see this fic fly. Good luck.
There are some interesting points and plot ideas. Please take another shot at it, maybe get some help to flesh it out. Don't give up, I'd like to see this fic fly. Good luck.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review the story to tell you how addictive it is. I don't usually read many stories with a pairing other than H/D but I can't wait to read more of this, and of Owned Husband too^^ So please, please, please update soon!!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
must know what happens next
must know what happens next
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hello, just found this story, please come back and write more of this story please come back soon loved it so far more please please send me a notification on updates thanks
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! That's so sad. At least maybe now Harry will be treated better, but that is so not worth losing the baby. So sad!
Ron and Dean are imbeciles, but I kind of hope they don't get offed, after all, they are victims of their own stupidity. And Ron would make a hot werewolf. :P
Ron and Dean are imbeciles, but I kind of hope they don't get offed, after all, they are victims of their own stupidity. And Ron would make a hot werewolf. :P
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's very different, please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.