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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, keep up the good work.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd read on to see where this is going. Nice writing style.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now this story is starting to get really good. looking forward to more.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG please keep updateing it is so exciting! I love how you use the book so much. the details are spot on! i'm currently dying with OMG-ness!!! w00t!!! =^.^=
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why thank you. I'm still enjoying this story though. I almost think the chaos of it adds something. i look forward to the next chapter.
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice start :o Several spelling errors that you can fix with spell check, for example, "white" instead of "wight". Not a big deal but it might be distracting to some readers. Otherwise, I like it. I'm really curious as to what Voldemort is going to be up to :o
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is a bit confusing to me... I had to read it twice but then I look at it again and realize it should be that way. after all you are trying to show Harry's thoughts and well thoughts are not always straight forward. I am looking forward to the next chapter just to see the insanity that will happen between the two.