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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
w00t! another great chapie! I think it fine that Luna has become the new Hermione! I hope you explain all this 'awakening' and mind wave stuff, cuz i'm kinda confused T~T...but very excited!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooo!!! Betrayal!!! I hope you know that i hate cliff hanger! *huffs* oh well, it was very good but i do have a question...is this Harry/Voldie or Harry/Luna...or both? :o *gasps*
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so this is the betrayal that makes him see everything in a new light? or is it what comes after? i think his friends think hes gone mad but its obvious hes not, yet.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seems like a very unique story =). I guess my only complaint is the number of errors... It's generally expected that a fic will have a few, but this one unfortunately moves out of the realm of "a few" and into "the errors are distracting me from the story".
I guess my suggestion is please get a Beta XD;.
Other then that, however, this seems like a really interesting fic, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
(BTW: I'd be willing to beta for you - elliot[dot]tedra[at]gmail[dot]com - resolve the [dots] and [at] into . and @
I guess my suggestion is please get a Beta XD;.
Other then that, however, this seems like a really interesting fic, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
(BTW: I'd be willing to beta for you - elliot[dot]tedra[at]gmail[dot]com - resolve the [dots] and [at] into . and @
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
May I say wow.. this is amazingly good. I am really enjoying this story keep it up.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"...and the boy who lived became the boy who lived again." lol! again wonderfully done! this stroy is really interesting! w00t to you!
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Nice set up with Harry saying 'I'll join you... not!' loved it! Where did he go though?
BTW, if you need a beta, let me know.
BTW, if you need a beta, let me know.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm fine with the fic the way you are putting it up. I say keep it the way it is.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
w00t!! so exciting!! I think you should keep it this length because you post so often, and that's a good thing ;) another great chapie! Loved the portraits btw
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi again ^^
Still a couple of errors, mainly to do with punctuation, such as using a comma/period before the ending quotation. A couple of spelling errors, but once again, nothing too noticeable. I liked the characterization of Voldemort and Harry lol Voldie is his usual creepy and maniac self while Harry still the courageous gryffindor :P You actually had my heart racing during the chase :D
Still a couple of errors, mainly to do with punctuation, such as using a comma/period before the ending quotation. A couple of spelling errors, but once again, nothing too noticeable. I liked the characterization of Voldemort and Harry lol Voldie is his usual creepy and maniac self while Harry still the courageous gryffindor :P You actually had my heart racing during the chase :D