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So when does this get to the actual plot? Can harry make wishes come true?

Harry ejaculated.. Was he wanking? And of course there then is a shaft but the ending here was weird

Where is this going? What is this wishmaster thing? Either the main plot here should come forward faster or the summary explain things more. Especially as this is unfinished. I was all rooting for some djinn like story but this was nothing of the sort like the summary implied. Good story but i was left dissapointed

Come on! Please write more? I love this so far! I've read it before and I've been waiting for an update for a long while! Please?!

After reading this story for the second time (at some point I realized that I already read this story before...my memory sucks sometimes^^) I still find myself intrigued with your story and I really hope that you'll find time and a muse to write on this story^^

awesome story! i loved it! But... I haven't read the 7th book. Would you mind repeating the "second prophecy" for me? So far I've been able to keep up, but I'm afraid I won't if I don't know how the second prophecy goes. By the way, your pace is fast, but completely understandable to the reader. I like the adrenaline rush I get while reading each chapter! You combine enough detail with action with dialogue to keep the story at a most pleasant equilibrium. You get a gold star for rocking my socks off with this completely amazing story. I hope you are able to get away from Sims 3 to update again soon. Until then! :D

Oh my gosh! Wonderful writting, thrilling plot and I am pratically twitching while waiting for an update.

Hey! I meant to review at the latest chapter you've put up but I couldn't help but want to review this one ^^
This part: "It was a small gap but a gap none the less, and through it, Harry could see part of an eye, looking back at him." lol even though its not that uncommon to see this, it still creeped me out a bit xD I very much liked the chase scene~
What I like about this story is how easily I can get sucked into it. I don't know what it is *scratches head* but hooray! onwards I go :P
--xxwhite

Your writing gets better and better :P I like the descriptions here, and have no complaints xD The only thought I had after was that I missed Luna's usually goofy/head in the clouds attitude but considering the situation they're in... understandable!

--xxwhite

Very interesting concept for a story I'm really excited to see where it leads!!