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for Redemption

by luv1711

person kazfeist
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, looks like a bit of plot has crept in! Can't wait for more, you've hooked me. Isn't it always easier to hurt those we love? We know all their weaknesses, and they know ours. Hopefully Hermione won't be in too much pain for too long before Draco can find her. My money's on Blaise being the kidnapper.
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm confused......how many times did Draco screw Ginny?
person kazfeist
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you decided to continue this. It's unusual, as it's usually Draco who is unfaithful. I am looking forward to seeing how you handle this and their relationship as it goes forward! :D
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe she would do that. I'm actually a bit pissed and it would serve her right if Draco dropped her like a sack of hot potatoes. Did she think he wouldn't find out? Oh I love Lucius and all but I don't think she should have gone there if she's with Draco. Go Draco is what I say.
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, That was good and very necessary drama...... keep them coming...
person whogirl
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You accidentally uploaded your story "Betrayal" here instead of "Redemption." Could you please fix it soon,, the summary for "Redemption" sounds interesting.
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was really well done, I really want to see this continue on with a bigger plot, please don't say it's a oneshot!