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for Betrayal

by luv1711

schedule April 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

EXCELLENT

schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable reading! I always love polyjuice stories, especially with Malfoy's present! Keep up the wonderful writting! -Shayne
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome one-shot. Any chance of turning this into a full blown story?
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievably this story didn't have more reviews. Well from a very happy and now hot and bothered reader - bravo! I read this story once before and it was well worth reading again and reviewing. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry, confused...so this is Betrayal and NOT Redemption? And the other story is NOT Redemption?

I was confused by the AN note in the second chapter and now saw this.
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice little one shot! I can see Lucius figuring that as long as no one knew it was him it wasn't cheating, per se