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for Missing You

by neelix

person Shellnet
schedule May 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM

It was sweet and in OK ending except for the fact that you pointed out that they’re about to have a 40th anniversary but you kind a left that what he actually did to get her the gift and everything out kind of leaves that little? So a coup it was sweet and an OK ending except for the fact that you pointed out that they’re about to have a 40th anniversary but you kind a left that what he actually did to get her the gift and everything out kind of leaves a little question mark you could have had just thair 40th aniversery but i love it and it was so sweet you could maybe have had them  reenact their wedding night for the aniversery ware the same close and all

schedule November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A cute distraction. Thanks for sharing!
person triz
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it. wonderful and intresting epi. i don't remember reading a fic that went so far down the road. sev is quite a nice and grumpy grandpa. haha... it made me laugh.
person KellyJCR
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
your endings are always so sweet! Well done!
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely, sweet and tender. Thank you. HG4eva
person KellyJCR
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sweet story. When it started out I really thought it would go down a different path. What a pleasent surprise! I hate to see it end as I have enjoyed it so much. Well done!!!
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous story. This used to be a favourite ship of mine and now I remember why! Very well written, very authentic. Hope you keep it going, one-shot intention or not.
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hello, just found this story, please come back and write more of this story please come back soon loved it so far more please notify me by email story updates email is sjrodgers108@bellsouth.net
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I love it and I can't wait for more!
person KellyJCR
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow glad to see you back! Needless to say I love it. I hope you continue this story for a bit as we have't heard from you in sometime. Are we going to see what he has bee up to or why he stayed away for so long? What about Hermione what, has happened to her to have her in such a state? I hope there is more. Well done!!!