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for Worth his while

by LadyDisdain

person Giang
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I just finished reading all your stories here so far and I must say that I love them all. Kudos to the fact that you're not fond of 'Slytherin sex god Draco', because although I tolerate it fine, I especially like your characterisation him. There are a few grammatical errors that annoy me in your stories, but the quality of your writing makes me overlook that. 'Worth His While' was quite adorable in a not-too-fluffy way, and I would like to read more of it, although it is not necessary as this ending is great.
Thanks for writing & hoping to see some updates!
person Jess
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great drabble! Complete in it's own right but left me wanting more - a good thing. Is this your first story? If so, very well done. One minor point - I thought your description of Hermione while she was entering the room was a bit cliched (doe-like eyes etc), but otherwise a very well written story. Look forward to reading more of your work
person nice
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww that was cute :)
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I just read your review to my story "Who cannot compare cannot complain", thanks for that!
"Worth his while" is quite short, but I sometimes just need such short pieces of fluff... It was very cute, even though I have issues imagining Draco that shy... but then again, I've got problems imagining him crying, even if that happens in canon, therefore I don't think he's OOC, I'm just not used to it. I like your style, please keep up the good work, maybe you should write something meaningful and deep, I'd like that!
person kazfeist
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was sweet! Shy!Draco is almost never seen, anymore. Well done. :D
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so sweet...
person Megan
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. That was so cute. Are you going to make it a multi-chapter fic? If not, I think you should go for it. I know I would love to read it.

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