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for The After Effect

by KillingProphet

person kunitsu
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just great, love it
person Makovaso
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, please update soon.
person js
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story thus far. I like that you managed to capture Snape and Harry's relationship and desires without demeaning either of them.
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He is going to be hurt and confused when he finds out what they did.
person puritey
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a random story... But I like it! o.o
person LiaStar
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well written start which will hopefully turn out to be a very well written story. Glad to see you're still writing Kitten.

Lia
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't say that Hermione and Blaise is crazy :D
And she would definitely be a dom, too^^
Wonder what Snape as planed for Harry...
person MWolf
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has caught my attention . . . I will be most interested to see where it goes and how, ahem, "accurate" it will be. As someone quite familiar with the D/s 24/7 world, I am always a bit cautious when I see it in fanfiction - I have seen too many do a poor job of explaining/creating understanding for those who are reading that are not familiar. The pairing of Severus/Harry has only caught my attention recently, but it is one that I do enjoy, particularly with Snape as a true Master/Dom when paired with Harry.

As I said, you have my attention because of the subject matter - I do hope to read more.
person Elphaba
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far!
person Elphaba
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a twist I didn't expect