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for The After Effect

by KillingProphet

person Kit
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! please please please update soon!
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is wonderful can't wait to read more. Update when you can please.
person Orkchild
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE. Okay I'm selfish but I still want more.
person Claire
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You certainly did capture my attention with this chapter, i loved this! and cant wait for even more... please keepit coming :)
person sanda
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Elphaba
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I LOVED it!!!
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh I wanna see what happens!!!! I REALLY wanna see what happens!
person Gypsii
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! I have never read another story like this. I literally want to squeal. Sigh- you are a great writer and great story teller. Keep going!
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
person Lakoma
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG--I hope you are going to update VERY SOON. This story is wonderful! Yes, you do have some grammatical and spelling errors, and if you need someone to beta your work, I will be glad to do so. I can do it for grammar and spelling alone, or add my comments. Either way, I would be happy to help you. I love dom/sub stories with Severus and Harry. You're doing a great job. Also, Hermione with Blaise? Wow. I hope you'll show us more of THAT relationship. I am also curious to see how Hermione will train Harry. Will Blaise get jealous, or will he understand? email me at: lkm40@yahoo.com if you need a beta.