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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love Love Love it...... Hey all good stories most end? WHY?????
person kazfeist
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! The dress, shoes, HG/HB play, all of it. :D Going off now to look at the ring....
person Coipje
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh I love it :D
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the ending! Thank you so much for such an erotic and exciting Draco Hermione love story! Hope there will be more to come!
person smmz79
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woooooooo hoooo what a fantastic chap... this was a great chap i love the progress that draco has made he does really need to be secure in his and hermiones relationship although he is awful yummy when his is possessive and dominant.... i can not wait to see what kind of shoes she picked for her wedding.... i love how he propsed the ring is beautiful and i LOVED the role play scene how hot was that and draco really got into it!!!!!! yaaahhh ok i am soooo excited about the next chap and yeahhhhhh two part epilogue wooo hooo.... :-)
person vbruce
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can see your Hermione planning the dress around the shoes. I can also see Draco being very reluctant to enter therapy. Most men are far more disinclined to it than women are due to the stigma still attached to it. The crafting and overall pacing of this has been wonderful. Fabulous job.
BTW, thanks for pointing out I'd misspelled Giorgio Armani's first name. I'm somewhat embarrassed since I have several of his pieces hanging in my closet. I'll just chalk it up to brain blip and hope I'm forgiven.
person Robs
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for happy endings!....well, not yet, but getting there. They really are a perfect couple, and you write them so brilliantly. And the shoes. Oh the shoes. Well, keep up the good work, I can't wait for the wedding chapter!!!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know absolutely nothing about fashion, especially when it comes to shoes. And yet I LOVE this story.
And I'm afraid if you don't update soon, I may have to pelt you with cookies. Lovingly and with the best intentions, but pelting nonetheless.

This story is charming, witty and very clever, in my opinion. Please keep up the great work.

-TehMandaboo
person kazfeist
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know the feeling well. Same situation here. Update when you can. :D
person smmz79
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
life can throw us some big curve balls and this fic is worth the wait..... :-)