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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person vbruce
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was marvelous. I never thought I'd see part of my own handfasting vows in someone else's fic but I'm pleased just the same. Beautifully done. Can't wait for the epilogue.
person kittycat30
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely wedding night. OK, it was brilliantly hot!!! Draco's pov huh? I can't wait to see what goes on inside his amazingly twisted little mind... (lucky Hermione)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how on earth I missed the last two chapters, but I somehow did! I looked every darn night! How did I miss it!? ARGH!!! BUT...I got to read three tonight, so it's all good. ;-) Thank you for showing his growth and willingness to change, even if only in her presence. lol I loved that you didn't change him too much from the snarky, pain in the ass, prat we all know and love. :-) And, that wedding...and her parents (sniffle)...and his gift (teared up completely!) ...all just so wonderful. Their first time as man and wife was simply delicious, too. (snicker) Merlin, this story has been FANTASTIC! I look forward to the epilogue and what Draco has to say. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Your adoring fan,
HG4eva
person Anon
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect wedding chapter - sweet, romantic, nostalgic yet hopeful for the future and still totally in character with the personas you created. I felt like I was right there watching them make their vows. And loved the idea of their brand new bedroom where their 'children are going to be conceived' (which was about the most romantic thing he could say in my opinion). Beautiful clothes and shoes (as always) and my one question that I hope makes it into the epilogue (tries not to feel too upset that this story is coming to an end)is Lucius going to come around the way Narcissa did? LOL
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY finally The Wedding!!!! I was getting worried there for a bit that you left us. Wow what a chapter!!!
now that is a beautiful wedding dress.. sigh i wish i could drop those 4 more sizes and fit into a dress like that.
anyways, I am sad that this story is ending, but it is Bloody Brilliant!! I will definitely read it over and over. much KUDOS to you!
person kittycat30
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I've missed so much! I was on vacation and now I'm reading and reading! Everything is wonderful... so, since I've missed lots... will you send Draco to spank me? *winks* I had to at least ask!
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, thanks for another awesome review. :) So pleased you got a laugh over that line about Goyle. Yes, that last chapter needed to come from Draco's POV and how cool that you enjoyed the last line too. And you pictured him out on that balcony just like I wanted you to. The only part I didn't like was the bit where you said you were working on the end of this story. Wah, I don't want it to end. But since I know it has to, promise me you have another story waiting in the wings after this one. PLEASE!!!!!

Onto the important stuff - love that Narcissa was out shopping with Hermione and the girls. That was the perfect touch. Their relationship is going from strength to strength. And I love Todd. Can I have a Todd? I need one - especially when he's bring out such wonderful goodies to try on. LOL

And she's all moved in at the Manor and even Crookshanks has made himself at home. Awwww. Love that she and Draco finally had that long overdue talk and that they really listened to one another. I bet it was a doozy of a discussion though. LOL Interesting point on the therapy though and I loved the background info regarding Pansy going there as well as there being a service to provide for other children of death eaters - nice addition.

Aww and what a romantic proposal. BLoody Blaise better be right about what???? LOL Did he help Draco decide on the ring or the place of the proposal (also very well done, I must add). Loved the ring (and the clothes and shoes as always). LOL

And finally their role playing scene - damn that was so f-ing hot!!!! Loved the whole thing. Damn, why can't I have a Draco of my own? LMAO Do these guys really exist? (Sigh) Oh and then I have to read that we're nearly done again. BOO!!! And LMAO, getting a spanking from Draco doesn't sound like much of a threat? LMAO
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha I loved the roleplaying!!
can't wait for the next update!!
xoxox
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, I love saving your story to read when I'm feeling kinda blue. It has this wonderful lightness to it like a good trusted romantic comedy. There are moments of great insight and depth but for the most part, it just really captures the essence of romance. I love this Draco, willing to go to therapy. Baha. He sure needs it, and I'm glad Hermione got him to go. The proposal was so sweet! And I LOVE the ring. RAWR!@the head boy/head girl role play, you know that's one of my kinks, and you did a great job with it. Very hot. I love the note this chapter ends on...and THOSE shoes! So many imitations, but never seen any quite like those, beautiful. Great update, can't wait to see what they're wedding is like.
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! i didn't even realize you had updated until just now but that chapter was absolutely amazing and so incredibly sweet. *sighs wistfully* that was honestly, the best way to propose to hermione and their interaction is just perfect - sweet yet challenging at the same time :) draco is so devoted to her. love this :D

can't wait for the wedding!!