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Oh I like the first chappy, nice start, has depth and good character definition.

I'm so thrilled you've decided to write a story. Now I can finally give you a proper thank you for the times you've given me such lovely reviews by doing the same for you. :)

Love the idea of a go getter Hermione who likes the way she looks and is into fashion and what makes her look good too. But you also showed the vulnerability underneath it all that shows that she still feels she's just not good enough - no thanks to Draco. I love the way he manipulated his way into getting her to head the deal, you just know he has a plan for her in all of this and I can't wait to see what it is.

I'm not game to look at your shoe pictures, I'm afraid I'll fall in love with them all too - if the descriptions in the story are anything to go by, I'm already halfway there. LMAO. Looking forward to more. :)

Knowing that we're both fans of Blaise, I'm hoping he makes an appearance too. ;)

Well, heck! I want one, too. I can't wait to see what he has in store for her on Monday. lol The smartest witch of the age, my tushy. He dates every kind of woman, he dabbles in all things muggle, he DEMANDS her and only her on the project, he's never brought a witch home to his parents but the work MUST be done there, and he has become friendly to every person on the planet but her....Oh, Hermione, THINK! lol I am really enjoying her hate him/lust after him dilemma. I also like Ginny and Pansy, so far. Thanks! I look forward to more soon. HG4eva

excellent!!!!

this is really good. are we being spoiled with the fast updates? if so please don't stop! you are a grear writer and i can't wait for more.

I knew I shouldn't have looked at those shoes. LMAO I LOVED the last pair. I'm not going to ask how much or where from though, that will just make me sad. And no worries with Blaise, I can wait for a possible story for him too in the foreseeable future. (looks hopeful)

Hmm, now those portraits were very complimentary, weren't they? At least his ancestors more or less approve even if they don't know (or perhaps remember) who she is. And whoa, jealous much when she said she was going out on two dates. Poor Draco, I almost feel sorry for him. LOL Love it. And her uncertainty around him, I can already feel the heat and tension. :)

Chapter 1

I know I have already told you, but I think this story starts out so fun! You

Excellent beginning, you even sold me on the fact that Hermione would be wearing stilettos. She always does anything put before her at 150%. Draco is at his usual devilish best, I can't wait to see what he has up his sleeves and why he's requested that she be the one to head the project. Oh, and him staring her down during the presentation, hot! Him calling her a dirty girl. Really hot!! I can't see where you take this. Update soon!

OMG this is BRILLIANT!!! I can completely picture Hermione, from ponytail to Louboutins. And I positively GRINNED when Draco called her out for being a dirty girl, asking if she kisses her mother with that mouth. I for one can't wait to find out just how heavy-handed he CAN be! Excellent chapter--well done! Thanks for creating such a clear picture of the setting and writing a chapter that just sucked me in!

Nice start! I look forward to seeing where this goes and how fast. ha ha ha Seems to me both are already ready. snicker..

Thanks, hon and please update soon! HG4eva