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Dear margaritama,
We have been reviewing other fics together for so long and I have finally euphoric to u see that u have started to write and u posted up this amazing story thus far and u have such and amazing support committee from some of the best writers around as well as a kick ass beta. But to the crux of the endeavour in short words the first chapter had me clamouring for more like a hungry and thirsty vagabond. I love the story progression, layout, character's personality and OH GOD the shoes, I have died and gone to heaven. The underlying domination that is so blatantly coming in regards to draco and hermione I love it, their banter and his anger I love it, Hermione subtle submission, I love it all, but i did love how she stood up for herself, and blasted his ass, that gorgeous devil is looking so good. I am loving to hate draco right smug bastard but oh so sinful, u make my knickers sing.....

Respect
Scarlet

Chapter 2: Ok i loved the scene where the girls are shopping and chatting, i was really feeling so sad and helpless for hermione, draco was really an insenitive prick to her in the past and I could honestly say i knows how she is feeling. But the revelations on how much malfoy involved and indulged in himself with muggleborns and muggle aspects of his life shocked me, but I think Pansy has an idea, hence telling hermione to ask him why he does what he does. Honestly I loved how natural u made a fashionista hermione believeable and to easy to swallow. You made her seem so together, beautiful, confident, all the while keeping her brilliance, not empty and ppl dont have to ask if u hit your head this morning and decided to write this...lol. But hell I want a phantom draco too, that was hot and i was talking bout my knickers singing hell u ruined them....sigh that was hot and nasty, the dominating draco had me spinning and panting....sigh u evil woman keep up the great work. I love the shoes. Oh, are we going to see those mysterious come-fuck-me-now shoes that she was given in the store?

Respect
Scarlet

Chapter 3:
Oh lord I was so nervous and on edge for the encounter, and I was biting my nails so badly. Draco is such a devilish character and u have him down so well it should be a literary sin. The way he stares at hermione, smirks, throws her off balance with just his voice and the way she automatically acts towards his demands, and heck even the way he insults her, he is just sour snake cuz he cant have her, this chapter proves that. OH god the way he demanded to know her whereabouts and what she is doing and who she was going with was priceless, he so wants her and the lusta nd the tension was practically stifling the room.
Although I did want to smack the bastard for his rude remarks towards that was just plain hurtful. But we all love to hate the egotiscal prat dont we, we just want one of our own so we can spank the naughty boy...sigh and I love hermione's flustered reaction, poor thing, that was just the first day.... Oh and I was scared for her when she was walking around the place and she thought she would see THAT place again and draco was actually a bit considerate...I like that, even though he still a prick. I love your story it has me so excited and so shoe happy.
"Nice Shoes, margaritama."

Respect
Scarlet

please continue and I just adore those shoes man !!

I love this, the shoes take the cake. And an angry smoldering Draco!!!
:sigh:

Simply put:

I want more please & soon!!

haha

Much love & respect
dM

p.s. LOVE the shoes!!!

i don't know what's up with malfoy, but i'm truly loving this, lol. and i love that last pair of shoes! I'd totally buy them (were they not leather, i don't wear leather).

Chapter 2

I love this little love affair Hermione and the gals have with their shoes. Having major feet problems myself, I cannot wear heels. Consequently, all this shoe talk is like opening up a whole new world. You talk of shoes as if they are rare and coveted items and it makes them sound incredibly sexy. I think it

yeahhh an update!!! ok so i checked out the link for the shoes love them i have a pair similar just with out the peep toe... ok so that was a VERY interesting first day... i think hermione gets to him more then he lets on and why in the hell did he care who she was going out with that was an intense moment when he was asking her about her date so i am wondering why he cares could he have had a hand in all of her other relationships ending well maybe not all of them but a few???? hmm i do not know but i tell ya what i am definitely excited to see what happens next also in the second chap ginny and pansy were talking about why draco has dated muggleborns and his reasoning behind that while they did not go into to a lot of detail i find that i am curious about that as well??? great job!!!!!! loved it

I am really liking this story!! I love your characterization of Draco, and Hermione. You still retain the core qualities, and add a lot of other qualities(Hermione's love of shoes, being a fashionista), to really round them out. Really can't wait to see where you take this