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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person Coipje
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG
I want those shoes gosh I am in love.
Love the fic too please continue.
But those shoes
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!!! i cannot wait to read more... omg i love the shoes. the pink and white ones were my favorite. Ahhh i love shoes and i really like you story. kudos!!!
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bloody fucking hell this story is amazing. Please update! Love the last pair of shoes, maybe you should post the link to the chapters shoes first so we can get a picture before we run into them in the story.
person LancesPet
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn you and not having more chapters.

Let me just say that i felt a pull at my stomach and my breath quickened whenever Draco would order her... like at the end of chapter three and through chapter four. Oh my gosh. Love. <3

Update soon!

clarice.
person MegNutz
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing! I was soo bummed when I realized that this was the last chapter to read lol can't wait until the next one and hope u update soon!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good gracious! Poor Hermione is simply losing all control isn't she? LMAO I do wonder if he knows Occlumency, because she hasn't been trerribly guarded with her thoughts. lol Loving it!! Please continue. I promise a longer review next time, but I have to get to bed, as I have an early hair appointment. :-) Hugs, hon!

HG4eva
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job so far!!... love all the gorgeous clothes!...I want her wardrobe!
update soon.
person tsorg
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One:

I adore that you have Hermione as a confident, in control, woman on a mission. She's secure in how she presents herself and loves to look good because it gives her that added boost of confidence!

The girl's night out was great, yes, those nights always seem to start out innocently enough and then someone has to bring out the hard stuff. In my case it's tequila shots, what I wouldn't give for some of that hang-over potion when I've lost whatever sense I had!

Love, love, love the snarky Draco, why is he so damn attractive when he is an absolute prick? Silent intimidation, this is a man who clearly knows how to exert control in very subtle ways.

Then calling her a dirty girl, love the fact that you have her secret, little passion being the sound of his voice. She probably thought she'd faint dead away when he purred to her she was a dirty girl.....squeeeee!

Awesome job, Toots!
person nikkuman
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco a Veela? He's acting awfully veela~ish
person tsorg
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, lovely scene of Hermione, Ginny and Pansy shopping together. Love that Hermione is the resident fashion expert, the friend you call to help you put together the perfect ensemble! I need one of those, can you send her my way?! I also love the tag teaming of Pansy and Ginny when they are encouraging Hermione to sit down and talk with Draco so they can have a better working relationship. And, aren't they dropping all kinds of questions in her head as to why she should talk to Draco with the "Draco is muggle this and muggle that...."

I'm so glad I don't have a Todd in my life! The man is evil, he's like a drug dealer and shoes are like a drug to Hermione. He knows what she likes and just happens to have ordered shoes in her size knowing she'll buy them! Good thing the girl makes a high salary!

Be still my heart, a dirty talking Draco, even though he was imaginary I could visualize him too, please send him over to me! Good lord, it's gotten hot in here.

Lovely chapter!