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Oh, I do love this story!

I have a feeling that the portraits know something huge that could change everything for Hermione... I also like how... possessive and powerful your Draco is, so Slytherin and sexily firm handed. I don't mind the femininity of Hermione, and how fragile she seems to be despite her strong-mindedness. I was surprised at that.

What Draco did to her, and then what he did afterwards in C.6 was terrible, but very appropriate. I actually almost expected it, in some way or another. For him to put his guards back up, after using her is just so... Malfoy of him. She shouldn't be surprised. And I believe that he did it to get information out of her, to show her her place in his life and his home. To me, at this point, she is just a toy to him. A very hot, necessary toy.

And the smut! The thinking about sex... The "consequences" of thinking about sex... (With Draco...). This is anticipation I am happy to experience!

I am loving your shoes idea. This is something that will carry your story along quite soundly, and represent each chapter (or day) of her life in this fic. I love how it seems as if she has an infinite amount of shoes that she only wears once. And I'm awaiting the chapter when she wears those "special delivery" shoes!

Keep it coming! I love your timing, and I love your update schedule.

Oy, something else. I think it would be nice to have the link to the shoes at the beginning of each chapter. I've imagined these shoes, sometimes, and finished the chapter only to look at the picture in the link and be terribly mistaken. I think showing the shoes early on, although it would somewhat defeat the purpose of describing them, would aid in setting the mood for the chapter.

Just a thought!

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@Ch. 5. Those boots are badass! And thank god for Cecilia! Now I know Draco is up to something....sexyass conniver : ) Hermione should have a few ideas, but she's probably in denial huh? Great chapter.

Once again another great chapter, looking forward to part 3.

AHHHHH...why did he do that? Afraid of getting too close? A wonderfully written chapter, thanks for a fantastic update!

Chapter 5

This was another excellent chapter hon! I just love all these extra tidbits you add and the relationship Hermione has with her friends.

So Hermione and Adrian are just friends, eh? I was hoping that Adrian wanted a little bit more so he would be competition for Draco. Yet I understand if you don

Yes, I do indeed love Cecelia, very cunning and the epitome of a Slytherin. LOL And those boots OMG, they were awesome and I loved the red dress/tunic too. Picturing Ron with his mouth full of food and not wanting to know who she was shagging was a classic and I spent the second half of the chapter waiting for Dracoto walk in and catch Hermione and Cecelia talking again. I can't wait for the next chapter to know what Draco's reaction of her in that outfit is. And I agree with all the reasons you stated, not that I think your Hermione is OOC because to me she isn't, as to why she's acting the way she is. :)

uh oh! well another great chapter! can't wait for the next one and hope that it is soon! keep up the good work

I LOVE Cecilia! She's so classy! :)

Holy crap those boots are hot! Good lord! You know I just saw Twilight, it was one of my birthday present and when I read that quote and thought, "Ha, ha, that reminds me of Twilight." Of course stupid me, I didn't click into the quote! Yeesh!

Loved the lunch with Hermione and her friends, very funny especially Pansy cutting straight to the chase to find out what was going on with Adrian and Ron and Harry flipping out when they thought they might possibly hear any shag facts about Hermione!

Thank goodness for Cecilia providing a little bit of clarity to Hermione, otherwise she'd still be getting whiplash from Draco! So Draco makes her heart ache does he? Love hurts so good!

Great job Girly! Your story rocks!

Oh, I want to know what "dreams" he is pursuing ;)