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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

It's over... I am so sad. It was a lovely, lovely read all through the chapters. And the very last sentence? Oh so fitting for this story! :-)
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's over!!! *SOB* Your fic is by far the FINEST piece of writting I have read on adultfanfic. Quality wise. Even though i also love love love the plot, I just wanted to point out how FANTASTIC your writting is. Even the epilogue, which many a times can be - dare I say - 'cheesy', was superb and believable and satisfying and the least cheddar-y thing at the end of a 'happily ever after' fic that i have had the pleasure of reading lol.
person kittycat30
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh!!! Absolutely perfect PERFECT ending! I love the list. Really, just perfect!
person mhaj78
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An EXCELLENT story--I'm sorry to see it end, but loved the whole thing. ;) thank you for sharing your talents with us!
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read your whole story today, and I must admit I was hesitant to do to...the title made me think it was going to be a draco/hermione toe sucking shoe fettish thing...definately not my thing...but I read it anyway...and I loved it...I love how your portrayed Draco...he should be strong and assertive...he is not going to be the crying whinning type man...he has had way to much happened to him to ever be that way...at least that is what i think...i also like hermione as being in control and strong...again, she is not going to sit back and put up with anyone's crap...great job developing your story keeping the reader interested...
person smmz79
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that wedding was perfect i love that it was not too long but not too short i hate when a wedding is like the whole focus of the chap and you feel like it will not end this was great i love the shoes and dress wow and the epilogue is going to be in dracos pov now that is going to be very interesting
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wahooooo!!! BRAVA!!!!! A job VERY well done. I can't believe that was your first?!?!?! Dayum, you put mine to absolute shame. lol I loved every moment of this story, even when I wanted to strangle Draco for his "dark side" or Hermione for her easy acceptance of it at times. :-) This was fantastic! Thank you. And, now I guess I have no more excuses...must get back to writing...

Hugs to you,
HG4eva
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story, and beautiful ending!!
I hope you write more!
xoxo
person nikkuman
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm sad to see this one go. I really enjoyed it , shoes, story, and all. Thank you.
person Robs
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant ending to a bloody brilliant fic! I can honestly say I am sad to reach the end. It has been an amazing story to follow. I will be looking out for your new stories!