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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person smmz79
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG yeahhhh that was a great chap and full of soooo much.... i love hermiones determination in this although she does seem to melt when draco becomes all dominant oh but who wouldn't that was very hot ok so obviously this was all planned but i am still wondering what was so big that he had to put pansy under an unbreakabloe vow.... the scene against the door was so freaking hot i love absolutely love how you have written draco... i can not wait to read the next chap to see what he says is the reasoning i am sooo excited that we get to find out everything.... i loved hermione snooping i so would have i mean she needed to learn more about him because at first she thought he hated her but after the last chap with the girls she had realized it was more and of course she was going to try to figure it out...... he is obvious around her!!!! i loved this chap and absolutely cannot wait for the next... oh and the shoes were hot!!!!!
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVED the Dolce & Gabbana pumps from chapter 3! And those boots! The Sigerson Morrison Huarache Boots... TO DIE FOR! *sigh*
Oh, this story is great... Though I do wonder what Draco is planning, and What Cecelia has to do with it.. Hmm, can't wait for more!
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! I enjoyed this chapter very much, we can deny those two have a damn good chemestry, they fight, they fuck and they love like no other hahaha really I think J.K. made a mistake pairing her with Ron but aside that awesome detail, I really love the detail of everything, Chapter 8 I really loved Adrian muttering he was going to get killed but he didn't care and well this one hahahha I wasn't left unsatisfied. great work, now take care, UPDATE SOON!

Love
Lola
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was one hot chapter. Please update!
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God...... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This has to be one a my fave storys at the moment!!!! Well done!!! Thanks for the picture links.... they are great!! And hubby loved the Agent Provocateur site!!!!!! Lo0oking foward to the next update!!!!!

<3 xxxx
person Coipje
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this Chapter was thigh-clenching :P
love it
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was so fucking hot!!
please update soon!!

Casey
xoxo
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was hot hot hot, and lovely and about time.. please do not leave us here we need more shoes a lot more and a lot more mischeivious Draco Malfoy ... Brilliant!!!
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
9 1/2 Weeks was one of the hottest movies ever made. And your take on the scene was just as hot. I'm looking very forward to the next chapter of, hopefully, more steamy hottnest inside Draco's bedroom.
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was hot enough to make me develop a shoe fetish! If that is what a pair of sexy high heels can get you, then its obvious that I need to step up to the plate! I have just started reading this story and I find it and your shoes choices fucking fabulous! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. One quick question though, will Draco be buying some fuck me pumps for Hermione in the future? I think it would be very interesting to see what he would choose for her