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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person Serranna
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I've just read the first chapter of Her Shoes, and I love it.



But part of me really doesn't want to keep reading.

Why?


Because your writing is so wonderful that it makes me want to go back and re-do everything I've written in my own stories!! Damn, I wish prose flowed out of me like that.


Of course I'll keep reading. I'm a sucker for a good BDSM tale.
person Serranna
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Um yeah, guess what I'm doing all new years day? Reading Her Shoes. Oh my, it's so good. I just got through chapter 9---so fantastically hot. I loved when he was chasing her around the desk and she told him he was being childish. God, I wish I had a Draco Malfoy in my life. Men should read this as an instruction manual for how women want them to behave in the bedroom.
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was the most amazing draco hermione story i've read this year. YOU. WIN.
person tenoh27
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A truly wonderful story, and for a fashion-idiot, all those images of shoes and dresses have come as a sort of delightful surprise. I definitely came out having a deeper appreciation for the beauty of shoes. :)
Thank you so much for the ride!
person nikkuman
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is hilarious. I had to read this story a fifth time to notice the T Stevenson reference. That's terrible.
person AuntKiki
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just (finally) signed up as a member on here, so forgive me for reviewing so long after I've read this story. You are amazing and I loved every bit of this story, so much so that I was on pins and needles with anticipation over what you would do with the next chapter.

Also, as someone who was actually voted "Class Bookworm" by her graduating class ( so flattering), I definitely appreciated the depth and range you allowed your version of Hermione to grow. :o)
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Could you please, please, please, pretty please with cherries on top...continue on with the scene with Hermione, Adrian, Theo, and Blaise. It gave me the tingles. Obviously I'm not really in a position to make demands, so I'll shamelessly beg and flatter instead. You are an amazing writer and if you did write this amazing menage a trois (i know that means only 3 - which i would also be incredibly satisfied with) I would be forever in your debt! Hey, I'm just saying think about it. Maybe the idea is just as tantalizing for you as it is for me. If not, then I will just have to reread that chapter over again. *sigh* What a terrible fate. ; )
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. Draco was a little confusing to me though. His personality seemed to change a lot throughout the story.
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
doll, i finally got to sit down and read this. and i am so glad that i did. this is bloody brilliant. i loved everything about it. the shoes, the clothes (michael kors is my fave designer), your characterizations of both Hermione and Draco (and whoever that reviewer who said Hermione would never act like this was off their rocker, you hit both of them on the head) and i love that you made me feel sorry for Draco even when he was being a jerk. it is such a great story. and the ending... so perfect *bounces* great job and i cant wait to see what you come up with next!!!!!!!!!

<3 tamatersweet
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome ending my love! I am so happy for them, and Scorp is so cute!