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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person kittycat30
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, Draco can't avoid this forever. What was behind his odd behavior? I'm dying to know!!! Lovely chapter *sighs* I'd love to walk in the rain with him!!!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, major leaps in their relationship with this chapter...MAJOR....I love him telling her to ride him..aww : ) Walking in the rain with a lover is so awesome. And what a nice way to end it for them. Now, I'm very interested to see where you're taking this, and how much Draco HASN'T told her, things are a little too picture perfect, and if I know you, you like a little more drama with Draco, yes? : ) Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve and oh yes, I do love those boots, I have a knock off pair myself. lol.
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For all that is holy...

Minus the Wellies...that was my exact moment with my fiance when I first realized I loved him. I swear you wrote that from my memory. I was so taken aback by it, I literally re-read it three times. It brought me to tears the third time as I recalled everything. I...just wow.

Scary.

Anyways, I'm sure you can guess how much I truly loved this chapter.

I can't wait for more.

xo
dM

I'm shivering! Just...wow.
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that so far this is also my favorite chapter as well. So wonderfully written. Especially that end. I love how she realizes she's in love with him. And then that kiss.....sigh. I can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, it was beautiful, passionate and practically had that story book ending one grows up dreaming will happen to her one day.

Which is now why I am very worried that all this goodness and delicious naughtiness is going to have one serious turnabout. Hmmmmm I wonder what's gong to happen next???????
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are amazing, I love the plot, it's so original. The shoe concept is fantastic, and I definitely love your fashion sense. I'm also impressed by the depth you have given Draco, I really think this is what he would be like, at least I hope so but the thing that fascinates me the most is the fact that you manage to keep me completely hooked to the story, actually making me squeal when there's a new chapter out and even though you don't have any cliffhanger I'm still wanting, craving, longing for the next chapter. Really keep this up, because you are amazing at what you do.

Madeleine
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story. How you made Hermione start to show her girly side and the mystery behind Draco.

I just have to comment on how fast their relationship is moving in Chapter 10. I feel like Hermione wouldn't want to move forward unless she knew what was going on especially with that inquisitive mind of hers but Draco does have his ways to avoid things he doesn't want to talk about that would make any girl forget their own name! hehehe!

I look forward to each new chapter and what pair of shoes Hermione will wear next! Hehehe!
Keep the imaginative juices flowing and update soon! ^_^
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite chapter too... Beautiful.... keep them coming ... Lovely!!!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done!! The pictures that your words conjur in my head are just wonderful!! I just love those wellies!! I live ina little country town in Australia and it snows next town over, so I have a pair of Jellie Bean Wellies!!! I just love them!!! Can't wait for your next update!!! <3
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking I had one of those silly grins on my face, while reading this. You know the kind.. You get so happy, you just HAVE to grin? Great chappy! Very well written, and the Wellies are adorable.. I've never heard of the brand, though, we do have rainies that resemble them. :)