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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person MegNutz
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh holy fuck! excuse the language lol that was a lil unexpected! but good lol can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was expecting the confession of having gotten rid of her boyfriends, and as Cecelia already mentioned him taking a loooonnnngggg time in his plans, I assumed that went back a ways, but the rest... Merlin! Her horror is so fully and completely justified. He doesn't even realize how much he did wrong, that poor confused, obsessed, aching man. I just keep going, "Wow...wow!" I have a feeling that while Hermione will take a long while to get past this, and Draco will have a lot of work to do to make her believe his love, the person that he should fear most is Pansy. Once she learns the full truth of his actions over the past years, and she realizes that she (inadvertently) helped him do this to her friend, she is going to lose it! And, I don't forsee Ginny or Narcissa giving him much peace either. Again, I say, "Wow!" I don't know who I feel more sorry for right now. lol Update again soon please. I can't wait to see the fallout. Thanks, hon! HG4eva
person andarte
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter 12! I'm not sure who I sympathize with the most, but I eagerly await the next chapter. :)
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pansy and Ginny are awesome friends...can't wait to see if Hermione takes the plunge first. Draco is hinting at it, but not saying it...I love that. Oh, I love their tense arguments and play. Whatever Draco wants, he gets...HOTNESS....I like that she's not a doormat, she puts up a little fight, and then caves, like any hot blooded woman with a hot ass dominant male would do. : ) They're really of like mind and yet you give them a nice tension. Happy sigh. I love the WWN idea, brilliant. A really fun and clever plot with the right kind of smut makes for good dreams. Thanks for that. Now these shoes are bold...not sure I can hang, but I love that dress. More please : )
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I reallllly love your story and I can't wait to see what else happens. It's very well written.
person Fallen Star
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!! To be honest I started reading it cause all my other ones I follow haven't updated but damn I'm hooked!!! Yuo got hook, line, and sinker!!! Can't wait for the next update!
person ichiruki
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
@ Chapter 1, interesting! I like how's its already a done deal and he's just watching her this whole time put on a show, pervvy little bastard! lol!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

Those are such cool shoes! In fact, I think those are my favorite. If only I could wear heels. I honestly shouldn
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love a Hermione so motivated by her work and concentrating on what she should be doing to the point of being annoyed at/by Draco for his naughty little interruptions. LOL I was annoyed by his self righteousness but you explained it beautifully further on so I can see where you're coming from on that angle. Besides, I don't think Hermione was really complaining at the time and he did apologise afterwards. :)

And oh dear, whatever are they going to do with the rest of the week off? LMAO ;)

Don't know if this will help, (if you're not already using it) but perhaps Harry Potter Wikia might be able to give you a few answers if you need them. harrypotter.wikia.com
person smmz79
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah loved the chap Draco really is very sexy when he is all possessive and dominating.... loved the chap and i LOVED the shoes and dress was hot.... hmm so hermione went and talked to pansy and ginny about her feelings for draco i am sure that they know more then they are letting on about... so they should have an interesting week loads of time for her to quiz him about his past behavior but he keeps saying that the time is not right so what is he waiting for i wonder hmm.... can not wait for the next chap but do not worry a story this good is worth the wait....