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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

person tsorg
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the girl support system that Hermione has in place then had to laugh when first they are all in agreement that Draco is obssessive and what he's done is creepy then all of a sudden it's romantic in a dark and twisted fashion, that was very funny! I agree with Hermione, her friends are goofy!

Draco of course coming to the wrong conclusion in the cafe that Hermione and Adrian had lunch in, how did he know she was there? Did he follow her there?!!! And then to send an owl and tell her it's over, what a weenie and then trying to get her taken off the project?!!! WTF, he wouldn't even be where he was with the project without her. I loved her conversation with Kingsley, talk about a woman on a mission!

I agree with Kingsley, Draco is a DEAD man.... The tension is awesome! Great job Margarita!!!
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was not ready for this chapter. It was quite a shocker. I mean, I suspected something was going to go down because they were too happy. But this surprised me.

First off, I wonder if Jared Montgomery is going to show up again. Obviously, he is Draco
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a major step back outch.... pls... update soon I am dying here...LOL
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh OMG!!! what a loaded chapter!! he finally came clean to Hermione, wow what a sneaky bastard. But he did all that so that he could have her. Well i love this story and i cannot wait to read about what happens next. will she forgive him? will they ever get back together? or will they get back together and are all lovied up couple? Kudos!!!
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, he came clean more than once, didn't he?

Good chapter, interesting twists. He messed up.
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck shit omg that was one hell of a cliffy the last chapter OMG OMG u are on a roll the story rules and oh lord the shoes especially the last pair...sigh update soon
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Even though I knew this was coming, when Draco said all of that, it really hit home how obsessed he's been. It's creepy as hell...and yeah, if I were Hermione I would have freaked out as well. I love my Draco dark, so if they get back together, I won't have any problems with it, but I know if this was real life, that fucker would have a restraining order on him within a day. lol. Oh, I LOVE LOVE these shoes. Not sure I'd be bold enough to wear that dress, but it's HOT : ) Oh, and Draco's handling of that jerk at the party was awesome, and he was so close to telling her he loved her without any pressure when dude interrupted. Stomps in frustration. I'm very interested in how you're gonna work this out, but I have faith, love will save the day...that and some hot ass sex. lol. Great update, Margarita : )
person rainieg1
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did not see that coming at all. Hermione has every right to be angry. I was angry for her. But on that note Draco is still yummy.Tank you for this.
person tsorg
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a biggie, you know for the life of me I know he's twisted but I feel bad for him.... he loves her, okay, in a twisted, dark kind of way but I don't think he's ever loved anyone before!

Loved, loved, loved the shoes, they were hot and I like that Draco kneeled down to play with them a little!

Also loved the little side trip to Greece, very nice touch Hon, it shows the passing of time so there is some time behind what they've been building together. A hot, sexy Draco in hot Greece with virtually no clothes, I'm soooo there.

I also liked her exerting some dominance in the bedroom (or in this case the chaise) hot, little tryst!

Excellent Chapter Margarita!
person kittycat30
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, you got me. I had NO idea!!! I guess I can kind of see his side - but hello crazy!!! Well, I'm ready for the ride - I hope! Give us more!!!