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for Her Shoes

by margaritama

schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want to be Hermione when I grow up! Merlin that was perfect!!! Thank you for showing that she isn't just the bright because of books. I love love love that chapter. I think I am going to go back and read that again now...

Okay, I am back. Way worth the price of admission! Girl power at its best. Set - Game - Match! The little digs (Was that a growl?) cracked my ass up!!!! YES!!!!! I wish you could see my face now, because it's beaming! My sister and I are on the phone now talking about it and we couldn't be more ecstatic with this most perfect witch/chapter/revenge plot! Yes, yes, yes!!!! And, Blaise coming for her at the end....DELICIOUS! You are my hero right now!

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HG4eva
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I actually like Hermione's plan :P Really got into Draco's nerve! LOL Can't wait to read next step of a plan. Did those Slytherins she dated know it was a plan to get back Draco?
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, had to say it again...LOVED IT!!! I can't stop smiling! This will be an EXCELLENT work day! Thank you, hon. :-D HG4eva
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter MM, Hermione is *my* personal hero, oh I hope she has Draco *begging* for forgiveness. On bended knee, maybe while she 'allows' him to well.... ;) Anyways, great chapter!!!
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Total, utter, complete BRILLIANCE! YAY!
person smmz79
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha omg she is giving draco a taste of his own medicine.... wow he needs to realize that hermione is not a puppet in his life that he can manuever at will.... fantastic job.. i am glad that pansy and ginny are in on this they are a great support system for her... and cecilia moving in with hermione is something else i can not wait to see what narcissa has to report on how draco is acting at home... love outfits are fab esp the shoes!!!!!!!
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! I never laughted so hard in my life! I am still in tears! Brillant! I am really enjoying your story. Can't wait to read more.
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! i love this chapter!!! wow did she make him jealous. Pure Brilliance!!! Awesome chapter. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I wonder what Dracos revenge will be like for this stunt.. hmm?? cannot wait. KUDOS!!
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, I love Hermione!! :o)
great chapter!! I love how jealous Draco is... but really, he was the one who ended, can't blame anyone but himself!! hehe
cant wait to see what happens!! beautiful shoes by the way!!
update soon!
Casey
xoxo
person Robs
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitely the lioness!!! The dragon has some grovelling to do, I feel. Loved that chapter. Hermione really can think like a slytherin when she puts her mind to it. The shoes are just a bonus. Can't wait to see what she inflicts on him next!!