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I like this, especially as the both of them are painfully unaware of each others true feelings, and what with this Derek fellow in the way as well with his overly friendly manner keeping them apart each time he shows up. Well I'm hooked so please continue with this sadly sweet tale of yours as I hope to see some spicy times ahead. TTFN.

I like it. It is funny, and well written.
Bye
M

I think that was so in character for the both of them it both scares and amazes me , can wait for more and bravo!

Oh god this is incredible.

oh, this is so cool! i am loving it!!!!!!!!!!
i really hope you continue soon, cant wait to find out what happens next. love how you showed both of their POVs.
really looking forward to another update!!!! : )

oh man those two are so oblivious to each other