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Terrible place to leave it, dear. Cruel, really.

ack! you left it there?! what happens?!

(The whole shebang)

Yay! I'm always glad to see a new story from you! And...erm....well, when I read the other reviews and saw that the whole story was posted on your LiveJournal, well.....I just couldn't resist. And lovely it was! I love flangst! And I love your writing. And I especially love the way you write these two! Brilliant, and I can't wait for your next endeavour.

Well, this is a funny turn of events. Whatever will Harry do now as he no doubt will assume that this is either a joke on Malfoy's part, or great Merlin is he for real? I look forward to the date, and whatever may follow. Some humorous moments perhaps involving alchol-induced confessions of confusion and lust would be marvelous. Anywho please continue as this is really getting good.

oh!!!!!!!!!!!! this was so awesome!!!! i loved it so much! i knew that the secret admirer was derek. at the beginning at least.
then i thought it was draco...
then perhaps a maniac...
then back to derek...
and then maybe draco...
but then i remembered the maniac... etc.
anyhow, i was very curious to who would be showing up.
so glad it was draco!!!!!!!
although he wasn't harry's s.a., nice way of twisting it so that through harry's eyes, he thinks draco is his s.a.
i laughed at the parts where it was so obvious of those two's feelings and those oh so close moments when they were about to kiss : )
but i cant help feel sorry for derek..... wonder whats gonna happen to him now... O.o
anyway, loved your writing.
and i loved this chapter.
cannot wait for you to update!!!!!!
looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
update soon please!!!!
: )

oh wait! i clicked your name and went to your livejournal, and i saw that this story is there already! thats so great! hahahahaha!!
i'm gonna go read it there now.
i'll review you again once i'm done.
thanks for writing such a wonderful story!!!!

wow! This is fantastic so far! I'm REALLY looking forward to reading more! =)

Wow. Absolutely amazing story. I went on your livejournal and read the whole thing there. I loved this story so much. I could actually feel the emotions involved. It was so believable too. Very good job! Thank you for sharing. :)

more more more. i liked the switched pov at the end very nice. it was just what i was waiting for. update soon!

if this story wasn't so heartbreaking (I'm too emotional for fanfiction, seriously) I'd think it would make a marvelous modern comedy of errors.

Great writing, the characters truly come to life with their inner dialogue. You do a nice job of changing the focus to keep the story moving along. I think it's good that you're not pulling from the entire cast of Potter-verse, just a few to keep it realistic.

I look forward to reading more - I'm going to try to remember to review, because it's such a small thing to do in thanks for entertaining me for a brief moment in my life. So yea - thanks. Take care of yourself, indulge in some tea.