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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HI!! I dont review alot, Im flakey that way LOL, but I had to say for a first fic and for someone who isnt a native speaker you did beautifully. I will keep an eye open for you in case you decide to try your hand again =)
Happy Writing!!!
S_G
Happy Writing!!!
S_G
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, very well written and a perfectly served lemon:-))
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, sexy as hell, completely captivating. Totally, ruthlessly seductive. Thank you. I'm off to see if you have written anything previously so that I can have another fascinating author to obsess over.
~Mia
~Mia
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Job. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories. A sequal would be wonderful though.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If only all first times could be like that! Nicely done, and I will have to keep an eye out for more from you in the future.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucky Hermione, wish my first time had been like that ;o)
Enjoyed this story, very well written, any chance of finding out what happens next?
Enjoyed this story, very well written, any chance of finding out what happens next?
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful first fic! I would love to know if we could possibly get another chapter on what happens to them after. Well written story!! Looking forward to many more from you!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was Hot! very nice indeed...
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
are you going to do a sequil? or maybe continue this one. it was really good and now I want to know what happens next.