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for Broken

by Jesslynne

person Alaine
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have read hundreds of Abused!Harry and Savior!Snape fic's, yet you still managed to capture my interest with this one. I would like to see more!
person padme82
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually like the poor!Harry genre. Please update soon. If you have an update list, include me. padme82@yahoo.com

-- snow
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very promising start! Please continue!
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful beginning can't wait to read more of this. The ride seems like it could be real fun and fraught with with angst just right up my alley.
person Darkless
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very good start.

Yes it's true that the plotline is one often used, but it's a great start. Each version takes on a different feel as it's guided by the differring points of view and imagination of the varied authors. Some, sad to say, are lacking in writing skills and don't do any story justice. So far, your skills show promise of a great story. It's facinating to watch a broken/abused Harry be administered to the snarky yet capable Snape, aaaaand if it ends in slashy goodness....that's all the better. I'd love to see how you lead your plot on.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Poor Harry. I hope Sev can help.
person Makovaso
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.