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love the story so far. I completely agree on the diliking of people rushing these kind of stories.
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LOVE IT! Such a sad plot, but an amazing story. Please, PLEASE UPDATE!

Ah, angst whore that I am, I believe I will beg you for more!

Nice. You handle a difficult topic very well, and your writing is excellent. :)

I'm very glad to hear that you're not going to have Snape take on the role of Harry's new master. Your story is developing very slowly, and I mean that in the best possible way. No one likes a rushed romance.

Excellent work, dear.

-- snow

I like the slow approach! It works so much better then there, "wham-bam-your all fixed-let's hop in bed" approach!

good chapter, please update soon.

How could so much damage be caused in such a short amount of time?
Harry was only at the Durleys for... what.. 6 weeks? Sure he was abused before, but now he's broken completely.

Ah, poor Harry. You wrote his confusion about the situation in which he finds himself perfectly. And I'm so glad we're seeing noble!Snape in this story. There are so many stories where Snape 'allows' Harry to please him with the whole 'oh it's good for him to adjust himself to pleasure' idea in mind.

With victims of abuse, it's never that easy. One of my favorite poor!Harry stories is Dark Angel by Eriador117. Harry isn't ready for a sexual relationship for a good while after the abuse, but he adjusts to being sexual again slowly. It's handled very well and realistically. I think you're doing a good job of this here. It wouldn't make sense for them to take up with each other so soon.

Thanks for the update email. Keep me on your list, yeah?

-- snow

good chapter, please update soon.