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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really quite liked this. Short, but powerful. I do have to mention that you had a few spelling mistakes, but that didn't take away from the story. Interested to see more of you!
Sophia~
Sophia~
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have never noticed that and I am a huge fan of Prince (I even own his movie on VHS no less) Probably because I never read the lyric books, if I had my OCD would have killed me.
>.<
I'll take your word for it, I don't want my perfect image of him ruined.
Lol.
KP
>.<
I'll take your word for it, I don't want my perfect image of him ruined.
Lol.
KP
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it, although I rather dislike you using 2s and 'U's in the lyrics it made it very hard to keep the beat.
Good job,
KP
Good job,
KP
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you fixed those typos. Makes the story much more clear. I'm not a huge fan of songfics, but as Snarry is my favourite pairing, I had to have a look at this. There are still a few punctuation errors, but all in all it's a good effort.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, although a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I'd love to beta for you, if you're still looking. :)
Supergirl_pernilla@hotmail.com
//P
Supergirl_pernilla@hotmail.com
//P
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a little confusing---in your summary you say Harry relives his life with his lover over "thier" grave, which would lead one to believe Harry was also dead...only he's not. And then, the name on the gravestone....Sebastian Snape?? Unless I'm misunderstanding something here, shouldn't the name be Severus Snape?