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for The Head Boy's Secretary

by PensievePerson

person AlasseaM
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this looks promising. I'm going to read the rest. :D
person AlasseaM
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My Lord is a bastard! xD Poor little Alice. Somehow she seems too innocent.
person vic
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
im sorry i can't read this anymore. This girl feels so much want but all she gets it pain. A bone never gets tossed to her. There's no reason to read something when all the main character has to look forward to is getting tortured.
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah...it was all good till his mouth watered at the sight of her poo....oh well i guess that teaches me to look for the scat warning on a story's details. good story though. Riddle is true to character...shit eating son of a bitch! lol
person Molly
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Considering how old Hogwarts is, I would say the upside down cross would not be associated with Satan at all. Until Hollywood made it a satanic symbol, the upside down cross symbolized Sain Peter, the first pope of the catholic church and keeper of the keys of heaven.
person vic
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it I hope you update soon!
person Jenea
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Alice, are you sure shes not a Hufflepuff. Only kidding.
Now Tom, what more can the evil young man do..... I look forward to more.
thanks for the entertainment!
person LadyLuthor
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story, well done!
person alice
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woo. Great chapter. Update soon!
person vic
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i liked it until he ate her shit. Im sorry but that is just too much for me.