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Aww that was a cute chapter! i can't wait to read more, update ASAP!

This was perfect.. Keep them coming please...

NIIIICCCEE! Draco's right...a houseful of males would be hard. I'd rather have a hard Draco..oops...sorry for the slip up. What a delightful chapter. I was grinning ear to ear.

I started reading your story last night and
I just finished chapter 13
:) Im really enjoying it!
Ive never read a Draco/Hermione fic but
this ones really good

update soon???

Dear goodness, that ending was delicious...I have chills at how cavalier Draco behaved. I also adored the ending. I really like this happier Draco. I mean we know he can be a git and selfish but when he gives himself, its all or nothing isn't it?

So, the story is longer than 12/13 chappies. I'm wondering what now? What about the war? Will Draco defect with Hot Nott? And will Pansy get her comeupance? LOL

LOL Well I'm glad you're happy reading my thoughts, I tend to delve right into the stories I'm enjoying and sometimes a one sentence review just isn't enough (for me). Again I agree with your assessments of both Hermione and Draco and also of Nott. I remember reading about that too. Or should I say Hot Nott because he is coming across rather deliciously too. ;) (as Margaritama puts it)

Anyways, that was deliriously hot (and funny) from start to finish. I love the idea of them having spent the night together and that they are letting themselves have some happiness. Their teasing banter of having to watch their so called respective dates paw the other at Hogsmeade had me nearly off my chair laughing. And ah, that last peppering of passionate kisses before they went their seperate ways back to the dorms. Le sigh!

ROFL at Ron's predicament and my goodness, he still doesn't get it, does he? Then again, he didn't tell Luna to buggar off and he did put up woth a lot of her antics and he was reading the book she showed him so maybe he's not as clueless as it first seemed.

As for the whole seduction scene in the store - HOT, HOT, HOT. I want some of that. LMAO And as for Theo - well here I am thinking that perhaps the real reason who took on Blaise's dare was because he secretly fancied Hermone anyway and saw the opportunity and went for it. Obviously he has no hard feelings about what happened and is very pleased for his friend's budding romance too. He is indeed a good friend to Draco. I like that. :)

did we just introduced to the book that has the potion that she is on at the end of the chapter. soo can't wiat to see what is next.... love the story

and better yet I love your quick updates.

thank you for writting this.......

Hi there. I've had a really crazy week, but the good news was I got to read 4 chapters in one sitting. YEAH!!!!

Chapter 11 - Love, love, love your Ginny! But, I am so sad that she allowed him to make her feel so worthless. Asshole! But, then she remembered she was "She was Hermione FUCKING Granger" and I was smiling like a loon in my living room. LMAO But, no no no no no, don't go talk to him...bad idea...bad idea. But, whew! He's no where to be found. YEAH! And, no, I'm sorry, but I don't care that he's having trouble sleeping as he works for Voldy. Too bad, jerkoff! The last part...GO HERMIONE!! GO HERMIONE!! GO HERMIONE!! That was brilliant. And, I think I might like your Millicent. tee hee hee Can we get a Pansy-butt kicking every chapter? LOL

Chapter 12 - I like your Madame Pomfrey and grown up-ish Ron. :-) Hmmm, now I wonder what he's up to. I mean, her falling for him can't end well for her, so if he's happy about it, then something's wrong. I know his outburst about Voldy was real, as he didn't know she was listening, but I still wonder what's in his deranged, little head. And, smiling at her at dinner...hmmmm I want to forgive him, I do, but... Sigh. Her heart can only take so much. Oh, and I like the idea of Ron and Luna. Too cute!

Chapter 13 - Oh, good! A whole chapter of his thoughts. Maybe NOW I can stop hating him... (Wow, is Snape really evil? Say it isn't so! Sniffle) Nice "mistake" Pomfrey. But, as I am not fully on his side yet, I cringed a bit when she told him. OKAY FINE! I am not made of stone. I get it, I get it. lol He's not an all evil, git. At least not completely. Part of me really does feel better knowing that. lol And, I like your Nott, even if he is an insulting prat to Hermione. lol

Chapter 14 - Well written day you did there, so far. There were some key things that jumped out at me. 1) "What we both want." 2) "No always means yes." Uh, no! No, it doesn't! 3) Nott was very casual and easy with their relationship. Made me like him even more when he didn't take a stab at her. Wonder will happen when people do find out...

This story is absolutely intriguing! I look forward to more REALLY soon. In case you can't tell; I am invested a bit here. LMAO

Great job, hon,
HG4eva

well crap, Draco is up that creek with out a paddle and barely a boat. he's trying to keep everything afloat and can barely manage. WOW.

I'm very curious how you'll handle everything with the war, Voldy and our two protagonists growing affection?

Hmm, Theo was almost civil to her even if he did give her a backhanded insult. And how intriguing that Draco's problems sleeping happened the same time as 'their' little incident. I think there's more to it than that but what Hermione witnessed certainly didn't help. I wonder if Madam Pomfrey kept her word and didn't tell Draco that Hermione had been in the hospital wing to check on him? And as for Pansy, although I don't like to condone violence as a rule either, I can't say she didn't get what was coming to her. I LOVED that Milliecent gave Hermione a look of gratitude too - very intriguing.

Next chapter - Madam Pomfrey was totally cool and I love that she has had a gutful of Pansy too even though she was a bit more civil about it. And has Pansy just told Draco what she did? Somehow I was expecting him to be a lot more pissed off than that. Loved the quidditch match, I was following the action as if I was right there int he stands with them - well done. I even cringed at the thought of Draco connecting with the stand. OUCH!! And OMG did Draco just give Harry a compliment???? LOL And Blaise really is a jerk in this story,(sigh). I better give him a good talking to. LMAO ;)

And I so get your point about Draco and Pansy now. I kinda (accidentally on purpose) forgot that she was his girlfried and technically Hermione was the 'other woman' so yeah, he is the more mature of the pair currently, he's telling it like it is whereas I think Hermione has yet to get to that stage or possibly still has her romantic rose coloured glasses still perched precariously on the end of her nose. It made a lot more sense in this chapter looking at it that way. :) And then, whew, the emotions playing out here, he says he knows she loves him and he's actually happy about it and they wander off like start struck lovers only to part the moment they get near any potential witnesses.......oh the intrigue.

And finally, I am just pissing myself laughing at the fact that Ron doesn't get why Luna sent him that letter. Oh please let Ginny explain it to him????? LMAO