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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a great update! I would have loved to "see" Hermione's revenge over Evan, but my imagination is doing a fairly decent job:-))
I hope Severus will be able to find a cure sooner rather than later, I am looking forward to reading more!
I hope Severus will be able to find a cure sooner rather than later, I am looking forward to reading more!
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't appologise for dialogue heavy chapters those are usually the most interesting. I see the little relationship starting to bloom bewtween Hermione and Sev and can't wait to see how it progresses. I am shocked that Hermione has not told anyone close to her of her situation, were is that renowned Griffyndor bravery. Looking forward to more. Well done.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't feel the writing is stilted. Like the story. Hope you will continue.
Thanks
Thanks
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great inventive storyline and excellent pacing, not the usual H & S tale. I hope you are a quick writer as I am eager to know what happens next.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, but I hope she isn't going to try to speed things along for herself. I think if she dies and they figure out what she was doing, her friends will be really, really angry with her. And if Severus doesn't get those notes organized, i'm going to crucio him, get to it, man!
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Let's see... what to say? Maybe just a simple, hurryhurryhurrywritemore! I love this story.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I certainly hope that Hermione is going to at least try to find a cure. And I'm so glad that Severus has agreed to assist her healer in his research as well. I can't wait to see how this all plays out.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic update! And your writing isn't at all stilted, you have captured Hermione and Severus's personalities brilliantly. (He will find a cure, right??)
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'mreally impresses with this storyline! Please continue it soon!
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how where this story is going so far. The intensity is brilliant! Please update again when you have the time.