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for Forgotten Memories

by Charmedlily

schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cool can't wait to see where it gos.
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha I like this so far, I want to see where the story line goes. Not to be a dick or anything I have a suggestion; though you may want to change up how you change through different points of view. It kind of gets distracting and takes away from the reading. By the way if you're ever in need of a beta look me up.
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I'd like to see where this goes. Hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting opening, can't wait to see where you take it
person DarQuing
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure it has, though not necessarily like this. :)

Its an interesting concept and H/Hr is one of my favorite pairings.

I like it so far, please update soon. :)