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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sniff*sniff* poor harry....damn that snarky vampire!! why didn't he pay attention to his love!?! grrrr.... well, i guess sev will get his comeuppance, one way or the other.....but will he lose his harry in the process? hmm......interesting food for thought, madam jesslynne....very interesting.....
--the Fuu
--the Fuu
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While I don't agree with any type of bashing, Ron does react strongly to surprises, carries his anger overlong because his pride won't let him admit he was wrong until his conscience eventually overrides that into a humble apology. Homophobia is most likely one of his hang-ups, and to suddenly find that his best friend is one - not to mention carrying a torch for the Greasy Git - would probably send him into fits. We don't know the 'Wizarding' world's take on Homosexuality, but it's your plot; take it where you will.
Very good so far.
Very good so far.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! How will Severus fix this mess?
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow love snape and innocent harry
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've just read all the four chapters after each other, and I thought it was time for a review.
I never really was into Creature!Snape/Harry fic's, but this one has proven to be interesting to read and very well-written. I like the fact that you decided to keep Harry slightly innocent. I do have to admit I have a slight weakness for Vampire!Snape, so I am glad to see you made him this way. Futhermore, I agree with you on the topic of Ron; I never really liked him in the books, and seeing how bad he responded when Harry''s name was entered in the cup (Goblet of fire), I can definitely see him respond just as bad when he found out Harry was gay. Last but not least, I saw in your author's note you plan to make this a multi-chaptered fic, with a lot of depth, so I am very anxious to see what you come up with. Sorry for all the rambling, but great job and update soon!
Alaine.
I never really was into Creature!Snape/Harry fic's, but this one has proven to be interesting to read and very well-written. I like the fact that you decided to keep Harry slightly innocent. I do have to admit I have a slight weakness for Vampire!Snape, so I am glad to see you made him this way. Futhermore, I agree with you on the topic of Ron; I never really liked him in the books, and seeing how bad he responded when Harry''s name was entered in the cup (Goblet of fire), I can definitely see him respond just as bad when he found out Harry was gay. Last but not least, I saw in your author's note you plan to make this a multi-chaptered fic, with a lot of depth, so I am very anxious to see what you come up with. Sorry for all the rambling, but great job and update soon!
Alaine.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww....poor harry!! i feel bad for him because he was booted out of gryffindor.... but! now that he is kicked out of the lion's den, can he be the new seeker for the snakes, bc that would for sure make ron even madder than he was about harry's orientation, because now harry can help draco and the snakes achieve the quidditch cup..hee hee hee hee hee hee hee!!!
and yeeess, you can have cookie dough...or turtle brownies, nice and warm with a fresh-from-the-oven taste? hmm, you choose, lol!!
--the Fuu
and yeeess, you can have cookie dough...or turtle brownies, nice and warm with a fresh-from-the-oven taste? hmm, you choose, lol!!
--the Fuu
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this..... Please update soon
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, please update soon.
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, it's so cute how severus is trying to avoid harry in everything, and yet keeps testing both of their self-control levels by allowing harry to have detentions and extra lessons...
please update soon, and have some of these nommylicious cookies to nom on while you make the next chapter...
--the Fuu
please update soon, and have some of these nommylicious cookies to nom on while you make the next chapter...
--the Fuu